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posted Sunday, August 07, 2016 3:11:14 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for Ham
The Moment

A fluke is what they said he is, but now he do it effortless
Movin records, Boomin
Dudes abusin all the regulars
They listen on the edge of they seats
To these venomous raps
So lets pretend he is
Possessed by an exorcist
Energetic sentences, erasing all the blemishes
Perfecting every verse to get the best of his nemesis
From brighton park to hegwisch hes a chemist of rhetoric
But hes white, and he raps, so right away they seem prejudiced
Forget it though, he let it be, he fits in with the ebony,
If music is his pedigree, his vocals are the recipe,
today is his reckoning, i pray Devin's remembering,
Flashbacks of his failed past that damaged his legacy
But hes a warrior chosen and thinks he's sort of an omen
He Swings the sword of a Conan, written by orders of Odin
Watch The Angels play chords on the organs below him
And With the eye of the tiger, his paw is clawin the moment
At one point he regrets years of falling on deaf ears
But now hes on a mission cuz he feels that his ends near
And this is his last waltz to dance with the devil in the back halls,
Near O'Hare, show no fear with brass balls
And everybody elses raps are catcalls that they speakin
...Off the leash hes a demon with no weakness
See, His whole life everybodys always doubted him but everything changed nowadays his haters are proud of him
Instead of clowning him brutal, they seek his approval and all these fake friends surroundin him with hopes to be down with him
But he keeps them at the outer rim of his inner circle,
Cuz he has trust issues, deep inside hes just a vintage Urkel,
The only difference now is that his confidence can raise the roof,
He figured out his place in life forever bulletproof,
his goal's to teach his son to stay driven the same,
Don't need 15 minutes of fame when your livin this game...

Cemented in stone, a path for head of the throne

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aham brahmasmi

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posted Friday, September 09, 2016 2:22:12 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for aham brahmasmi

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Maymon fresh

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posted Tuesday, September 20, 2016 12:42:03 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Maymon fresh   Click Here to Email Maymon fresh
Yea pretty good

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posted Saturday, October 22, 2016 7:28:54 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for samutahjazz   Click Here to Email samutahjazz
nice job liotta

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posted Tuesday, November 29, 2016 5:58:54 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for Realism
Flawless and egoless.

You are talented and gifted with making words into visuals, which is one of the highest arts.

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posted Saturday, December 03, 2016 8:37:59 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for True_Underdog
nicely written, try to keep your lines short tho if they get to long it gets odd to read and doesn't flow all that great

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posted Saturday, December 10, 2016 4:54:17 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Ham
Im the illest

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posted Sunday, December 18, 2016 12:12:44 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for Shahzad
Nice job.

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Maymon Fresh

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posted Friday, September 29, 2017 12:17:14 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for Maymon Fresh   Click Here to Email Maymon Fresh
I take that back this is dope reread it

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posted Wednesday, November 15, 2017 1:55:49 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for agent7D6
Liotta how obese are you nowadays? Flow is good. The conan odin stuff sux...cheez wiz. Maybe yul collab with Young Thug soon and do a Mervyns or Macys model add and wear dresses together. Kanye can do a cameo in a skirt while Asap Rocky giggles in the back with a man purse. Everyone izzz still asleep. I see you're still bacon. I couldah chopped the fat fuck off you....but all yall were and are snakes. If u got a kid I hope you do right by him you pizza shit.


Steve aka FUCKYOU aka Shapeless

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posted Monday, December 18, 2017 1:44:23 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for robby.j
some dope stuff in there, not a fan of everything but still a nice verse over all

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Groucho Marxist

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posted Monday, December 18, 2017 2:28:05 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for Groucho Marxist
lets here it mayn? looks like it would sound good. Glad you are still doing your thing. Glad to see it mature.

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MPC boy

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posted Wednesday, January 24, 2018 5:26:42 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for MPC boy

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posted Wednesday, February 21, 2018 1:01:00 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for thedoobiebandit
yo this was sick, not just because of the lyricism, but because you typed it in a way that made it easy for me to catch the flow of it. Good shit man, get this recorded!

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posted Sunday, June 10, 2018 4:43:59 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Devante1994
Hey dude I like your flow could you help me with mines? Here's an EX: I'm trying to make this rap work/
But can't see growth/
I need advice/
It's cold out here that's a coat/

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Leo Duh

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posted Thursday, June 28, 2018 4:43:40 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Leo Duh

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rareform dopeness

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posted Friday, February 15, 2019 7:58:19 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for rareform dopeness   Click Here to Email rareform dopeness
Dumb funny how ya deleted the clips ya shot from youtube... to tryna feed off our steelo didnt work out to well newbie.

You really care when the forum speaks in consensus to how corny you look. Peace in.

- JFCxRapTor

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