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I Care Pt 2
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Maymon Fresh

Total Posts: 1027
Member Since: 2008
Location: Can you be perfect
posted Monday, September 18, 2017 2:30:07 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Maymon Fresh   Click Here to Email Maymon Fresh
With my new exclusive who won't let me record but let me†seed So ruthless on removed uterus
Pretty toms of maine smile but she be sucking like she toothless
Raw skins since the beginning never ended cautious we fucking daunting
Mortal Kombat
to outsiders its so obvious
She no dick tease
Deplorable stark hint
Victory Flawless
Or suggestive to her good genes
to hark herald the Angel
In her sergios I guesses its
To hear her sing I been busting nuts
Rather impressive
till Im nauseous
Nested in her crib like she rib
Shorty awesome
Said she don't be cooking like that
Its just cause Im Special
She Mid town SoNo
Clamp it like Pro.. Freshs ..No!
.. got me feeling like Jethro
but this not Beverly Hills
Im more like heavily distilled drowning in modelo and bankruptcy debt F truck repossession aint made my house payment yet
How I get a
Caculating Spelmanite
My main Fan
High light her yellow bright
Shaved Land
Math Major
In trained stance made her paper off teaching
Celebrating my Rain Dance
now
Factor in how Im beating multiply
times..
i tell her I care..
She tell me she Mine..

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mcfuck

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Member Since: 2012
Location: Sirius or Xm?
posted Monday, September 18, 2017 5:29:43 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for mcfuck
oooooweeeee that opening bit is super nice man



With my new exclusive
who won't let me record
but let me seed So ruthless
on removed uterus
Pretty toms of maine smile
but she be sucking like she toothless
Raw skins since the beginning never ended cautious we fucking daunting
Mortal Kombat to outsiders its so obvious
She no dick tease Deplorable stark hint
Victory Flawless

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\Saga Sphinx/

Total Posts: 3459
Member Since: 2003
Location: London, England
posted Tuesday, September 19, 2017 8:13:40 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for \Saga Sphinx/   Click Here to Email \Saga Sphinx/
I agree with mcfuck. Whole verse was nice, but the opening does stand out.
Also, you have a dirtier mind than me. Gotta love that.

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joshnwmn

Total Posts: 13
Member Since: 2017
posted Saturday, September 30, 2017 12:45:07 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for joshnwmn   Click Here to Email joshnwmn
Your lyrical ability is on point! This is just constructive criticism and isnít even that much of an issue in my opinion, as I have to work on it all the time too, but sometimes it seems like you give up coherency in return for phonetics and rhyming. Again, small thing, since most of everything made sense. But overall I thought it was great.

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