Total Posts: 456 Member Since: 2017 Location: U.S.S.R.
posted Friday, January 26, 2018 12:45:13 AM
She opened up to me; I never spoke how much it meant to me It seemed to me her enemies resided in her mind Cause I think she thought dudes fucked her, and they loved her for her mind She could put it all behind her, trade it in for hindsight But she might like, to see what someone elses lifes like Shes played some characters, but it's hard to swallow the roles When anorexic behavior, starts to take that tole And her hands look old, cause shes obsessed with germs And every bed seems cold, as men take there turns And every up has a down, and each time its bolder It hurts me when she frowns, but her smiles are polar And I wish I could save her, but I'm so over bearing So I just watch from a distance, with out her knowing I'm caring
A mixed up girl in a mixed up world I got up in her mix, I couldn't fix this girl Stand tall girl, so you appall this world But there's beauty in trauma like a Dali mural You fixate on pearls, asphyxiate hurl In our keep safe Quarrels, you misplaces my girl
She finds beauty in butterflies, no subtlety in her lies Uses her pillow to smother cries, praying her mother dies Its nothing to other guys, but their lies are cheap talk But they all stop and jock, mock the way that she walks And they cop the bootleg, version diversion from her Shes unsure of the merging because her vision is blurred Somewhere division occurred, and she became two people Neither one is a saint, but neither one of ems evil Id say that one of ems feeble, one just hates too much She tries to cage her lust, but one would say its love On gave me her trust, but one would make shit up I should have just gave up, but really gave a fuck She wore an a cup. But now shes move on to bigger things She probably covers em up now, afraid of the snickering She use to paint and draw, but everything was a butterfly I had to withdraw she called it love when her lover cried
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Dyme Secta
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posted Friday, January 26, 2018 2:52:27 PM Nice format dropping the audio and the text. Keep getting busy Groucho Marxist. Have fun being creative. Thanks for sharing. Later.
- dymesecta
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Groucho Marxist
Total Posts: 456 Member Since: 2017 Location: U.S.S.R.
posted Saturday, January 27, 2018 1:20:12 AM Thanks man, someone helped me mix it and they came up with this.
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agent7D6
Total Posts: 202 Member Since: 2017 Location: Don's Market
posted Monday, January 29, 2018 5:23:05 PM "She wore an a cup"?? Say wut?,
The rest was a good read. Link to audio sux. Force feeds sc app. Peace
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Groucho Marxist
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posted Tuesday, January 30, 2018 1:53:47 PM https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tAioQIPcVlc
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MPC boy
Total Posts: 22 Member Since: 2018 Location: Legend
posted Wednesday, January 31, 2018 4:10:43 PM Beta rap
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ShaeTheArtist
Total Posts: 10 Member Since: 2018 Location: NJ, USA
posted Friday, February 02, 2018 12:42:32 PM You did a good job expressin concern... feel like a lot of folk try to capture an emotion and fail, but you got that. Also like the audio/lyric post combo.
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Groucho Marxist
Total Posts: 456 Member Since: 2017 Location: U.S.S.R.
posted Friday, February 02, 2018 2:47:24 PM I just can't make it sound the way I want to yet. I am hoping I can do that in a real studio. Right now I am just using a usb mic which works great for my podcast but not so much for recording music.
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g.morals
Total Posts: 9 Member Since: 2018
posted Sunday, February 18, 2018 6:37:41 AM https://soundcloud.com/user-590359193/3-rheanne?in=user-590359193/sets/by-any-means
You remind me of a dream I never thought to have. I’m glad that we the team while we walking down this path. I wanna see you laugh, I wanna see you smile, I want you to know that for you I could walk the miles. I could love a child, and I could stay myself. Always know that in your love I stash my wealth. It’s where I keep my heart, let’s never come apart, and be a part of the bigger picture we see at large. Cuz now we got a kid, and that’s the realest thing. I want to live in correction of all the wrongs I did. That Harley for this Joker, this ain’t my poker face - I’m spitting from the realest place I ever thought to face. You help me chase my demons, you help me place my meaning. I’ll help you trace your breathing, give you something to believe in. Let’s take the world apart, and put it back together - take something good, and learn to make it better. Mountains are for climbing, mornings are for rising. Baby we could see break free of the horizon. Lay low so when we fly, we don’t melt the feathers - upon the wings of time, oh what a deadly crime. See you’re my ecstasy, the only fantasy, and I don’t worry cuz I know you’d never say to me — (sample: I belong to someone else we know)
Fuck that noise, I ain’t no boy, I’m on my grown man shit and I don’t need no toys. I got my my voice and the mic, my boys and my wife, the baby, a job that’ll pay me, and lately - I feel like, shit ain’t so crazy. The world making sense without making a cent, but I don’t give a fuck cuz my world is you and I hope that you know that that shit is true.
Somebody told me once, upon a time to rhyme, and now I tell her this: see it could save a mind. The words are more than concepts, unfinished projects and golden prospects. It’s real to me. And you real to me. The biggest happiness I feel in me so don’t you worry I would never say to you — (sample: I belong to someone else we know)
Fuck that noise, I ain’t no boy, I’m on my grown man shit and I don’t need no toys. I got my my voice and the mic, my boys and my wife, the baby, a job that’ll pay me, and lately - I feel like, shit ain’t so crazy. The world making sense without making a cent, but I don’t give a fuck cuz my world is you and I hope that you know that that shit is true.
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g.morals
Total Posts: 9 Member Since: 2018
posted Sunday, February 18, 2018 6:39:50 AM
You remind me of a dream I never thought to have. I’m glad that we the team while we walking down this path. I wanna see you laugh, I wanna see you smile, I want you to know that for you I could walk the miles. I could love a child, and I could stay myself. Always know that in your love I stash my wealth. It’s where I keep my heart, let’s never come apart, and be a part of the bigger picture we see at large. Cuz now we got a kid, and that’s the realest thing. I want to live in correction of all the wrongs I did. That Harley for this Joker, this ain’t my poker face - I’m spitting from the realest place I ever thought to face. You help me chase my demons, you help me place my meaning. I’ll help you trace your breathing, give you something to believe in. Let’s take the world apart, and put it back together - take something good, and learn to make it better. Mountains are for climbing, mornings are for rising. Baby we could see break free of the horizon. Lay low so when we fly, we don’t melt the feathers - upon the wings of time, oh what a deadly crime. See you’re my ecstasy, the only fantasy, and I don’t worry cuz I know you’d never say to me — (sample: I belong to someone else we know)
Fuck that noise, I ain’t no boy, I’m on my grown man shit and I don’t need no toys. I got my my voice and the mic, my boys and my wife, the baby, a job that’ll pay me, and lately - I feel like, shit ain’t so crazy. The world making sense without making a cent, but I don’t give a fuck cuz my world is you and I hope that you know that that shit is true.
Somebody told me once, upon a time to rhyme, and now I tell her this: see it could save a mind. The words are more than concepts, unfinished projects and golden prospects. It’s real to me. And you real to me. The biggest happiness I feel in me so don’t you worry I would never say to you — (sample: I belong to someone else we know)
Fuck that noise, I ain’t no boy, I’m on my grown man shit and I don’t need no toys. I got my my voice and the mic, my boys and my wife, the baby, a job that’ll pay me, and lately - I feel like, shit ain’t so crazy. The world making sense without making a cent, but I don’t give a fuck cuz my world is you and I hope that you know that that shit is true.
posted Friday, January 26, 2018 12:45:13 AM 
