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mcfuck

Total Posts: 10303
Member Since: 2012
Location: Sirius or Xm?
posted Monday, April 16, 2018 11:46:44 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for mcfuck
currently im on my second plan
second hand product of listening to lessons manned
up, now my hope like a band's last act hopin you stand up
stand up like you just sat down im man down
man down in a mine field do you mind dude
come get me bandage me up its time you
handed me nuff help back
i guess i landed rough i cant help that
felt that snare pop closed hi hat for my night cap
i spy that deceitful shit you like dont try that
im passed that like faded out played out fades
so stay out just stay out fuckin way out my way
i play no shows except for those that get played
in your wavs, its a wave when i mp3 more than what you see
dont you see what you hear with your ears is openly
opening scenes cut from broken screens
i see these with my eyes opened free like 2 and 1 be 3
see my math is stacked up 5 to 8
afterwork this bastard search for time and gait
steps be patient so laughter make time pass at the gate
lines crossed so lines crash at the place
my own mind zone behind the past that i wait
passed what i hate half assed ethics at the theatre
wars be brought upon us broken structured adonis dont you see its her
waiting for eyes clear like i near too many cliffs to stear
my thelma and louise moment alone with my own atonement i wont go this
easily this shit means to me mostly what hope is
like... i hope this shit could rap up with legacy
my rap shit was catharsis my art is therapy as an artist
expression my weapon no weakness in swords drawn with wet pen
in steppin in
currently
currently

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cripboul

Total Posts: 15
Member Since: 2018
Location: Philadelphia, PA USA
posted Monday, April 16, 2018 1:56:54 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for cripboul
I can tell there's a lot of passion in this, but I think you can improve your lyricism. I don't think its bad, but there's definitely room for improvement. It is lyrical, not wack or anything I like the "ears are openly" visual, but I think the third eye stuff was wack, artists don't nail that shit like Deck or DOOM. Also, I have a post titled "End Game" if you wouldn't mind critiquing it for me.

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Leo Duh

Total Posts: 682
Member Since: 2018
Location: 90's time warp
posted Monday, April 16, 2018 10:51:52 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Leo Duh
Sickly

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mcfuck

Total Posts: 10303
Member Since: 2012
Location: Sirius or Xm?
posted Tuesday, April 17, 2018 12:14:13 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for mcfuck
and that was yesterday
AM.
so currently im writing the fifth letter
so maybe she can see that reconciliation is better
i said let her. threaten me empty-i still hold the cheddar
let me get this off my chest bet they shrink in cold weather
forever, expansion of thought when its hot currently
the current be forgotten so it undertows urgently
not slipping facts by like the last guy
surgically fast I subtract what the math buys
its ugliness curdling, currently purchased to hurt his
legacy currently degraded to sea grade urchins
searching blindly, reminded of complacency
aiding and abetting the letting of waiting be
normally hating these, crows calling judgement
try and comment on my subject get lost of in the dust with
fuck shit, should shut up and just shut quick
the thought remains the same the game just sucks dick
thats fellatio, like the ratio is suspect
ive been stainless since the silverware got lost in the dust bin
yall dust bowls, rusted goals get tossed in the loss win
column with these golems i dont know what the cost yet.
back off the podium i havent started to talk yet
so currently
currently
currently

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Leo Duh

Total Posts: 682
Member Since: 2018
Location: 90's time warp
posted Tuesday, April 17, 2018 5:03:10 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Leo Duh
Currently you get no courtesy from those sea urchins
Virtually your reality and deep sermons echo thru her beef curtains
They said keep workin, but fukk that,
U just mute up the beat,
Tune up the freak and now you speak certain
Flip it like trapeze virgins, that land perfectly on the sack
Thats up to you....
Wikka wikka
Now imma spin it back,
Currently
Currently
Currently for me no more wishy-washy,
All epoxy,
Current be calm, suburbanly,
Her foundation is strong,
No crumbles, 3 baths, 6 rooms,
1 for strictly the raps and sick tunes,
Yard a nerf gun platoon,
But currently, still bleed burgundy,
Currency, slight mercury shine,
Non-toxic,
30 min from the city i dropkicked,
Back in '09, crashed up, then stayed garage kept,
New objects, hot sex, so i purchased the box set,
Rebuilt kitt better than before, modded up,
Sodded up my com sense,
Realized that im next,
Now its a 6 figure new version that rips wiggaz
Remix
Underground like deep six
In trenches of deep shit
Ride the current radiant
High voltage gradient
Kill it like Heath Ledger on the 3 Tesla
Speak lectures, eat cheddar
With the marinara gravy train
Zip scsi daisy chain
Ensoniq old shit
Conservative
Sippin cold shit
Blue collar lager
Cheers!
Goals conquered
But no
At the same time
I was undersold
Cuz now i pour it out for my younger bro..
Currently

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agent7D6

Total Posts: 237
Member Since: 2017
Location: Don's Market
posted Wednesday, April 18, 2018 4:35:04 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for agent7D6
GoODd wrx N stRang3 4nD myStE3reUs wAYEssss*zzzz

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Leo Duh

Total Posts: 682
Member Since: 2018
Location: 90's time warp
posted Tuesday, April 24, 2018 3:33:29 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Leo Duh
Flow fixaroo

My situation currently? Still bleed burgundy,
Old curses circle me but nowadays I show em courtesy,
My currency, slight mercury shine,
Non-toxic on this version of rhyme,
I stay suburbanly calm,
My foundation is strong,
No crumbles,
3 baths, 6 rooms,
1 dedicated to just makin' sick tunes,
Half an hour from the city where I first drop kicked,
'09 - I crashed myself so I stayed garage kept,
Since then worked on my conscience, had some hot sex,
Opened all my books and tabled up the contents,
Rebuilt better than before, customized, purchased the box set,
Modified my context and said that I'm next,
6 figures, raise my sequel hope he rips wiggaz,
Remixed,
It's underground like deep six,
Yea its deep shit,
Ride the current radiant, the high performance gradient,
Heath Ledger on the 3 Tesla,
Speak lectures, eat cheddar
With the marinary gravy train
Zip drive scsi daisy chain
Ensoniq old shit
Conservative bogus
Sippin cold shit
Blue collar lager
Cheers!
Goals conquered!
But no
At the same time
I was undersold
Had to pour it out for my younger bro...


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Lyricalxs

Total Posts: 484
Member Since: 1999
Location: Dallas, Tx
posted Monday, April 30, 2018 10:03:21 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Lyricalxs   Click Here to Email Lyricalxs
this shit was actually dope. i liked it.
i might try this style on my next drop and see how it comes out.

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Leo Duh

Total Posts: 682
Member Since: 2018
Location: 90's time warp
posted Tuesday, May 01, 2018 1:18:35 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Leo Duh
Recorded mine

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agent7D6

Total Posts: 237
Member Since: 2017
Location: Don's Market
posted Tuesday, May 01, 2018 4:57:43 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for agent7D6
Sounds gud LiOdor. What is taking place here is quite interesting. Hard to tolerate it quietly but wutever.

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