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posted Sunday, April 29, 2018 7:34:51 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Marty
This is the continuation with beginning included

I was going for a walk and I passed a couple of blocks

And on the ground was a discarded cereal box

I picked it up and was about to put it in the garbage can

Because I am an honourable man

But I looked at it again and examined it in my hand

And on the back was a map of an unknown land

It had the words EAT THE PRISE TO ENTER printed on it

I asked myself “What’s the Prise? And do I want it?”

So I shook the box with some doubt, and suddenly a candy doll fell out

It was something that I’d never seen; a contorted figure the colour green

So I ate the candy, and did the experiment it tasted like spearmint

And with the candy in my stomach there was now also some fear in it

I continued on my stroll and then all of a sudden the whole world began to roll

I felt dozy so I got cozy and lay down on the ground with dandelions all around

I awoke in a place of serenity; there were monkeys and rabbits sharing affinity

It must have been the work of divinity

I saw an elderly man riding an enormous multicoloured centipede

He said to me, “Hi there young fellow, can I help you on the double?”

I answered, “Yes sir. I’m out of my level; this place seems kind of nice, but am I stuck here for the rest of

my life?”

He said, “You can leave right now; all you have to do is lie down and rest

And when you wake up you’ll be at the same place that you left

Or you can stay here and do our test

You are the chosen one because you ate the prise

Now if you prove yourself wise you will marry a princess and neither of you dies

But if you fail the test then you will meet your demise

So you can either go back home with no backbone

Or you can try to be King and get everything”

I told the elderly man, “Count me in.”

He said, “Okay, this is how you begin; you first find your way to Fordy’s Den,

When you get there he’ll give you a special bottle of Gin,

You bring it to the Candy House where the princess dwells with all of her kin.

And then you go to Chungar’s Castle and prove to him where you have been.

And here take with you this pen.”

I asked him “What in the world is the pen for?”

He said, “When you get to the Chungar’s Castle, you must know a code to enter the front door

You can use the pen to write down your work. And what I’m about to say may later on make you smirk;

You are going to have to think outside of the box and do the math.

You are now ready to go on your Path”

I was set for my expedition I checked the map without hesitation

Serene Village was my present position and Fordy’s Den my next destination

It was pleasant to mission through the beautiful presentation that Serene Village provided

A place where only good people resided

The vicinity was splendidly subdivided

With homes that invited dreamy thoughts to my mind

Every single house was one of a kind

All rowed together in straight lines, showing their individuality combined

With shingles in styles ranging from metal to vinyl to wavy concrete tile

Neatly compiled on top of hip roofs, gable roofs, and valley roofs

All the roofs were rust and water proof

The windows had character some rectangular with diamond grilles which were designed with skill

Separating the glass; decorating with class; flowers on the sills...

To be continued

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posted Saturday, May 05, 2018 7:21:07 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Marty
If nobody replies to my story, don't expect it completed on Ughh

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posted Sunday, May 06, 2018 10:26:55 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Porkelin

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posted Friday, May 11, 2018 12:58:43 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for agent7D6
Could make a dope audio trilogy out of this. Good details to add unique character to something done many times before. Nice set up. Cinematic. Names, adjectives, flow all moved naturally. Nothin rubbed me the wrong way. Not incredibley amazing but it's intriguing. I read all of it. A 3part 3song project could work. I'll produce it for 5billion dollars.

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