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A Message To Myself, Verse + Chorus
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erille

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posted Friday, January 25, 2019 3:29:07 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for erille
Verse 2:

This ain't no rhyme I designed to impress an emcee
It is a vocally notion, it is a message to me
Cuz my mind is on a vessel blindly settled at sea
On emo-tional oc-eans with depths of defeat

But you're left without speech, cuz I'm truthful and clever
When my lines drop at a therapeutical level
I'd do this forever and never ever loose my endevour
If in rainstorms I just had the shoes for the weather

It's a slippery road with slippers on tip of my toes
So I embark the titanic, with a wish it will float
But in the heart of Atlantic, in the midst of all hope
A big part of me panic as I'm drifiting from home

Insisting I don't,,,, now the regret is real
But as I'm heading down the path with nothing left to feel
I hear words, in my head, must be addressed to me
You can turn as long as there is breath to breathe

Chorus:

I'm smart enough to see - where ways will take me
I'm brave enough to be - making mistakies
But hard enough on me - breaking my faith
Yet strong enough to be - raising the stakes

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agent7D6

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posted Friday, January 25, 2019 7:33:47 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for agent7D6
"mistakies" is not acceptable. The rest has some great stuff, vision, flow✌;

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erille

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Location: Svedala, Skane, Sweden
posted Saturday, January 26, 2019 5:52:17 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for erille
Thanks, really appreciate the feedback. English ain't my first language so I don't always know what boundaries I can cross and not.

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