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Sword Stanza

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posted Thursday, May 24, 2018 10:21:52 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for Sword Stanza   Click Here to Email Sword Stanza
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hiphopaveragejoe

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posted Friday, May 25, 2018 11:06:37 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for hiphopaveragejoe
Nice man, sounds really smooth over the instrumental. Only comment would be that I think your voice could be a little louder or the mic crisper so the listener can clearly hear the lyrics. Good stuff though man, keep at it.

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Sword Stanza

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posted Monday, May 28, 2018 3:23:12 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for Sword Stanza   Click Here to Email Sword Stanza
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natural20

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posted Tuesday, June 05, 2018 10:40:50 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for natural20
Not my cup of tea. That's not to say it won't appeal to most though. I'm just particular about my hip hop, lines that flow into each other with coherency, like a story. I mean, I can sense the makings of a story in your track but it just feels like every other bar your changing topics.

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sianas

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posted Friday, June 15, 2018 8:42:39 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for sianas
Nice flow but yeah your vocals need to be louder. Also the sentences are too long. You need to break it up a bit more add more dynamics. The beat is really cool too. Great work.

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