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Atone The Underdog - Dedicated
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True_Underdog

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posted Saturday, December 03, 2016 10:24:39 PM    Click Here to See the Profile for True_Underdog
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Link 1: http://forums.undergroundhiphop.com/readpost.asp?Forum=MCAudio&Whichpage=1&QuestionID=50990

Link 2: http://forums.undergroundhiphop.com/readpost.asp?Forum=MCAudio&Whichpage=1&QuestionID=50940

from my "Dedicated" mixtape

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cMKtugJHJI8

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quidone

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posted Sunday, December 04, 2016 11:16:36 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for quidone
rhyme schemes are pretty nice on this, but i do think your overall delivery could use some work still.

if you don't already, i'd recommend memorizing your lyrics before recording them. there were a couple parts in this that sounded more like you were reading rather than really feeling out what you were saying, you know?

but no disrespect intended here, man -- keep working at it.

also, if you want the video to appear in the post, just copy the Embed link under the YouTube video itself, and paste that instead of copying and pasting the URL.

peace.

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quidone

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posted Sunday, December 04, 2016 11:17:16 AM    Click Here to See the Profile for quidone
like this:

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