NOT BAD, BUT LET ME RETORT...........
U CONSIDERED STANDIN' BACK//
BATTLIN' BACK, YA RHYMES AS PATHETIC AS YA MOM'S ON CRACK//
BUSTIN' SLUGS THROUGH YA VEST//
YES IT'S U THAT I DETEST//
SHERLOCK PROSE AIN'T AN MC//
U A DRAG QUEEN IN PANTY HOSE//
LEAVIN YA TOOTHLESS WITH RUTHLESS AGRESSION LIKE BENOIT//
THROW YA IN THE CROSSFACE//
BATTLIN' ME YA FEELIN DISGRACE//
PUT U IN YA PLACE LIKE HOUSE WIVES//
U GOT SOME HOT RHYMES//
BUT I GOT MORE HOT LINES THAN THE BACK PAGES OF HUSTLER//
THE PUREST FORM OF HIP-HOP//
LIKE SUGAR IN THE RAW//
U A SUBSTITUTE LIKE EQUAL//
YA STYLES PREDICTABLE LIKE THE SCREAM SEQUEL//
UNBELIVEABLE YA FEEBLE MIND COULD PUT TOGHETHER A RHYME//
DURIN' THE DAYTIME I SLUMBER//
NIGHTIME I'M A HUNTER//
A BLOOD THIRSTY ANIMAL TEARIN' OUT YA MANDABLES//
U GOT NO HANDLE LIKE FIRESTONES//
U LOST IN HIP-HOP LIKE CELL PHONES IN ROAM//
STAREIN' AT GROWN MEN GETTIN' ERECTIONS//
U BETTA COME OUT THE CLOSET AND FORFEIT//
MY RHYMES ARE MORBID, U TAKIN' DICKS IN EVERY ORIFACE//
TALKIN' SHIT ABOUT "RAVEN"https://
I'LL BASH YA BRAINS IN//
CAVE IN YA CHEST THROUGH YA BUBBLE VEST//
CRUSHIN YA WINDPIPE WIT A RUSTY KNIFE//
PULL OUT YA LUNGS WIT MY GRAPPLIN' GUN 4 FUN//
GOIN' THROUGH MY GARBAGE 4 USED CONDOMS//
CAUSE I HEARD U LUV SWOLLEN//
U A CUM SNATCHA, I'M A BODY SNATCHA//
TERMINATIN' WACK RAPPA'S//
WHAT'S THE MATTER?//
CAT GOT YA TOUNGE//
THAT'S THE ONLY WAY U LICKEN' PUSSY.
U SHOULDN'T OF STARTED SOME SHIT U CAN'T FINISH IT' OVER YOU'RE DIMINISHED.
DAMN u got ripped the fuck up LOL, favorite line(prose)...
you star? thats impossible, astronomical like a dyslexic kid trying to rock a topical
ill shit...im out
lil j kidd aka the skool boy
yeah, you took a good ass whippin kid
I go with Sherlock. Short and to the point. Raven's verse was just too homophobic.
man....now why'd you have to go and get all pussy....
hahahahah...this has to be the funniest shit ever, i started beef, ripped a kid, and killed beef in a matter of one day....
A-ight, I'm a be man enough to admit u won this battle. Put my pride aside for a minute, somethin emcees don't often do. But I'm a give u your props. But don't think 4 a minute that you've seen or heard the last of me. I just ca't believe non of cats were feelin me. Damn, I had some tough critics but you cats are impossible to get over on. I guess in the eyes of defeat it brings greater strength. Not gonna bore u no more. I'm out........
raven needs to chill
prose brought the flows
damn son... don't you learn?
Kid…this is getting drastic…like sawing bones with a dull knife
You should be a real estate agent, needing a new lease on life..
no matter how bright, text laranyx shines, you don't see...
fact one: i knew you where a faggot when you asked to spit behind me...
you star? thats impossible, astronomical
like a dyslexic kid trying to rock a topical
you where ducking and weaving as soon as the problem hits
i smoked you, then vollunteered myself to ARSONISTS anonymous......
i'm the ace of spades...kid hasen't even touched the deck...or FM bands
your out of a job like black jack dealers missing both of they hands....
aight... thats the LAST post i'm replying to.... you've learned your lesson... even the poeple think so.
go listen to an Eyedea battle, Juice battle, Sage Francis, etc.
even though they're freestyling listen to how they attack their opponents and attempt something similar yourself. i'm not saying go bite their style but listen to all the points they focus on.
I hear the same shit comin out the average "gangsta" rapper across the street.
sorry.. but that was wack as hell
then again, yer gettin feedback from one of the site's top battlers
work on yer punches.. cuz theyre tooo weak
no what i mean?