Tell Me If This Sh*t Is Good .... Need A Reply Or Tooo :-)
here i come watcha back grab ya pistol yea we strapped
we in the game now mtha fuker its a wrap
aint no freinds in the game only famly
niggas is lame and filled wiht som uch jelousy aimed at me
thats why i continue todo what i do
to try and make this loot to tell you the turth
roti poots get the boot
right in the asshole fo being bold nad rude
i unload touchin down on these niggas like tornados
im fatal but not an attraction/
i hit u on a trail dog catch your traction/
lemme break it down in detail bitch grab a distraction /
ill beat you down and kick your ass in /
how you gunan fight back yall is just askin ..
i got robins liek baskin ... reverse the words and you got an ice cream shop thats lastin/
arms im castin .. how you gunna make big dogg when im the one thats out lastin and standin /
i got your hole crew banned in one bar .. turn a corner bitch oll kill your life your soul wiht one bar .. stealin words out peoples minds leave you wiht a verbal scar/
im gods kinds smoke a herbal I spit verbal art /
smokin somany minds I spit tar /
make your family depart turn you to a bum pushin a cart /
ive raised the chart im heated so ima push the start /
needed more then a heart attack victims heart /
attack a victim faster then the surgen cant impart his heart /
ima master of words fuk these new rappers ima plaster thse nerds/
depart there vocals ima disaster in herds /
im the new castro black version I rip brains in thirds /
whips and chains stranglin cats till they mamed and hanged/
en electric surge I rip the menin out of each word/
enlighted mind dogg pass me the blunt ima teach you … cuz I could .
Havent seen this name in a while..
That would play twice for about 30 seconds. Sounds 2 commercial.
seems kinda simple in scheme....
message is blah...could imagine it in audio...
but content is just eh....
work on ya scheme more...and more complex wording...it'll make your content more interesting...