Can I Post An Audio ?
volumes are low, quality will not be that great, a teeny bit muffled... some two turntables and a microphone basement shit... shouts to dj coins and the dorm room we blessed, tho, along with the other heads who were there. drop the copper, dundaddaz.
i am artistic and others relate to me -
life's a veil, with this music they see thru me//
it's a feeling we down for, we touch ground for -
we clown for, we drop pounds for//
gifted to bless a track and ride the beat all the while keeping the thought intact to provide relief...
for the rhyme we live -
and in time we give -
from the spine to rib -
while you ask what life is this ?//
i got an 8 ball beanbag chair i sit in to feel lucky, here is where i'm livin, and i'm real hungry//
to do this like that -
hiphop went from fiction to fact -
you either get up or get back//
"guns on steroids"-ahahhahah
circumference line 2...
gabe seems a bit too sober for his own good.
--supposed to get internet at the damn apt anytime between today and thursday....
holler in the meantime.
This was kosher...
Agree with Bishy Bish...on a few spots you missed the drums...but as you said...one take and what not (no excuse punk!!)...
I`m feelin' the presence, but your delivery was choppy in a few places. Mos Def feelin` the wordplay / content lyric ish.. You know the business, i got some new shit for you in a minute.
Doper Schemes lines you slurred. Be easy.
yo,yo - TUNDRA LANGUAGE is on the fuckin' agenda..
I still ain't written the shit, but I got a start on it...And there's reasons I won't get into at the moment as to WHY it ain't written, but its not. Its on its way though, and I will holler with it, in the next two weeks.
Other hand, I just threw a verse to Kal, and i'll email it to you too...considering its appeal, its a definite Tundra collab subject, stee, you gotta see and lemme know if you're tryin to write on the shit too. I mean, there is no subject, cept for me being me, and that in itself is like ten subjects, but I know you know that.
But "Ice to Rain" is coming, if you want it, I'ma throw it to you momentarily, but damn Muney, Tundra Language at this point - is MY FAULT, and I take full responsibility for it not being done. Regardless, check your mail, and I'll peep this little basement production when I get the oppurtunity, no headphones at work right now, fucked up I know, but Eugene and a high speed connection is a week plus away. awwwright, so we'll talk soon - and I know I owe Bick a phone call, and your faggot ass a phone call, and Shylax an Azian Fury beat and well....yea, I'm behind.
Peace though, to you and yours, and my AIM sucks, and it was UNrunnable today, so I'ma run the fuckin shit tomorrow. Yeah, long message for a sober Stat, so I'll stick to being drunk.
try an get the levels better, and then it'll be easier to give feed, but its cool that you did it all in one take, sounded pretty smooth for that, you musta practiced the verse a few times, id like to hear more shit
i'm hoping it has to do with that straight up funk i was yakkin about at the beginning of the track.
chuh chuh cheaaaaaaaah
nova gon have to explain that term
the fuck does lionel richie have to do with it?
dorm room sessions -> I miss that shit. My bro had nowhere for his tables so they ended up in my room back in the day. Had the floor knowin the name.
Flows were cool...at some points you weren't selling yourself convincingly enough, but casual style was dug.
''bargain basement'' shit IS where it`s at,
thats hip hop - dont let someone tell u it
THIS was smooth - i enjoyed the stee,content.Flow was steady.NOT MIND BOGGLIN` ...but very ''commodores'' [ < ....
thats noves new slang !! ]....heh.
YEAH - get at me scrappy.
out of town.
truindeed, that's what kal said. over that beat i suppose it does require a little more hutzpah. good lookin out. that's exactly what i wanted. holleration
some people can sit behing a mic, an spit smooth an its sounds like they're talking, but their voice is good for that, so it makes the track an they sound better then if they were to get all hyped up an shit.
You got a good voice, i think if u got more hyped up an just spilled more emotion into what u say tht would add more life to this track. not necessary yelling, but more energy, confidence, like notice when some cats like Canibus or Xzibit spit, their just releasing every thing putting power into their words, getting u crunked up an shit.
this was still good dont get me wrong, thats just my opinion.
big ups for the replies, i talked to kal about this already, however when you say the delivery needs work, i'd like to know where and why... feedback is good, but i want something that would assist in building.
this one, like the others kal was talking about were done in one take, so it was like he said, some radio shit freestyle thing, no going back... grip it and rip it stizzy... there's no effects on it either, no editing... like i said, bargain basement hiphop right thurr.
good lookin on the replies, jus a little more indepth is what i'm looking for.
dope, beat was ill. Lyrics were tight.
Delivery was good, could use some work though. cant we all though?
Munson, can't hear this right now, but I'll peep it when my internet gets turned back on at the apartment. But yo, I got my phone fixed, and I'ma call you tonight when I get back from class. Got to do some catch-up holmes, and I got these beats bitch. Yeah...
yea this was alright, the two over nas beats are better, sound slike a live recording and shit.
when i get internet in my apartment, i'll check this shit out.....
props for not bein asleep at midnight q.
yaaay, smooth flow