Life Flashin Before My Eyes
I awake from imprisonment and blunt roaches,
With buzzin locusts unfocused by passin coaches,
On a bench at the bus station,
Dedication to the pulse of bullet vibration,
It happened like a white light crossin my eyes,
To my surprise I saw a man in a disguise,
Exposed to the shame pulled a replica 5,
I took a nine as my soul took a critical dive,
Deeper than navy seals deep in the hole of hells fire,
My mind started singin lies louder than a choir,
It’s death’s desire to see me down in a fryer,
20 years of late shifts, maybe I should retire,
me and the devil alike I feel seduction to strike,
innocent emcee victims with a mouth and a mic,
lost memories stepping up stage in my nike,
happened like flick it dismantled my psyche,
shiit... this was nice.
^^..remember it liek it was yesterday..haha....
Smokey man i was feelin this ..some hot shit here .....
yeah i know....youve missed a lot of shit happennin. we all took a stab at this whack wannabe emcee called mr e.
Not linked U in a minute Smokey......on the same tip as always....showin niceness.
How bout U switch up the style though...still reads a little snappy.
Your first two bars always match and then the flow seems to switch...why not see how far u can take the structure on from the first two bars. Just my bullshit opinion as always.
yo that was tight
you definitely got style
i could see this being a whole track starting wit you in the station
...good stuff here Smokey...a little short, but still aight..keep doin' ya thang kid...