Skill means nothing...it's all in the Title..sorry this one lacks one
don't mind me.....
barking up the wrong tree tends to get one bit
sometimes little do you know exactly who your dealin wit
looking outside in is the glass half full or empty
who's who ..how do you know..exactly who's the true emcee
minds confused and bruised black and blue will be the outcome
all those who step.. outdone...outlined in talcum
phonetical displays plant seeds to paint a landscape
what's the deal, who's really real, and who's really the damn fake
cowards hide behind translucent rhyme identities
replying "yo that was tight" but behind backs remain enemies
responses and replies null and void and mean zippo
while other posting paragraphs stay hungry like them hippos
trying to feed ego's self esteem must be on decline
i'd rather think of new styles to compile and then just recline
people leaving rhyme boards for some reasons that are personal
some i would like back but it up to them to make it reversible
no rehearsable written..straight thoughts upon the moment
eloquence intelligence relevance = emcee components
those lacking such..check your data recompile
so many disillusioned that are wack but in denial
"yo i'm the best" really..no need for your two cents
you need to get some sense or wind up non-existent.. past pretense
to me it's elementary locked it like penitentaries
eventually they'll mention me as lyricist of the century
if not so be it..i rhyme for just one reason
CUZ I LOVE THE SHIT, flip the scripts through each and every season
it's like oxygen to breathing
bandaids or guaze to bleeding
my mental medicine when i feel i need stress relieving
never start fueds on purpose..tell truth..some get offended
some may feel my thoghts are worthless..but for you this isn't intended
i'm always coming splendid from every angle like a circle
could make no sense lie rae and ghost
or drop mor knowledge than erkyl
never monotonous is the key to the rhyme profession
learning through experience..no teacher..learn your own lessons
success is measure by oneself fuck everone else
all you really need's some love..and basically your health
material objects..robbing stealing..murder all for what
"damn that kid got nice kicks..i think i'll stick him up"
good for you..momma proud..another wannabee thug
until it your blood spilt on your living room rug
what goes around comes around twice as bad and that's the truth
deep inside alot of you know this..it's happened to you..that's the proof
so reconize the wise and realize that time flies
and on earth since birth you cat's weren't blessed with nine lives
I've gotta fat head, too.
Regardless, Express your Self, Mr Rhyme Knocker.
(It's all Grins.)
Pretty tight, felt a lot of the content. Lyrically, I've seen you come nicer though this was tight. Keep reppin.
eloquence intelligence relevance = emcee components
peace to a real emcee.....yo i really do think youve got the idea with the title of this post.....just a theory though
Hot dayum, I was feelin' this...
May I quote ya?
"All those who step.. outdone...outlined in talcum" Rippin'
Keep up the messages sun.
The Tide is Coming...
I'm glad to see that Grinna & AO are buddies again (lmao).
As for this post, TrueSon's upset because he got torn up twice in one day.
lol at grinna
Really enjoyed this post kid; really.
you're on your way to that next level, getting very close, CAN I RIDE PIGGY BACK???
Hey Ano this is the first of your posts I've peeped and the skillz are evident. Tight post. As for TrueSon.......I dont know you from a bar of soap braH, but I can tell you got a serious complex. You seem to thrive off the attention you get from giving headz negative criticizm. If you're gonna diss at
least reffer to shit that applies to the rhyme.
i don't "praise " anyone ..i give mutual respect... and i beg to differ i am not the best (acknovvledged) but i am not part of the vvorst. i don't try to be accepted because if i am not vvho i am then i am not being true to self. and people think a certain vvay vvhen they are heated and not too many people knovv hovv to go back vvhen they're calm and admit they vvere vvrong... pride is an ill fate for an honest man.TrueSon
lick my juice, i will thrust your eye out
much respect kid
this shit was real nice
been feelin yo shit lately
Yo TrueSon, you need to get straight kid. In one reply you're callin' this cats verse garbage, and then you praising him? Sounds to me like you trying to hard to be accepted here. And don't even front on A.O. I've been watching this board for a long time, and you're lyrics can't match A.O.'s or most of the other cats on this board. You're too over-confident in your skills. Humble out a little bit, give praise where praise is due, and you'll get the same in return.
By tha way, Ano, this was a tight verse. This is the first one from you i've peeped. I feel your style. Much respect, keep it up.
OK OK ..vvilson fisk has a point i guess i vvas heated...and shit...*trueSon ashamed to be vvrong* anamoly your a good lyricist... i have to pray vvhat i preach i had to look at shit from all perspectives...but i guess i vvas heated because every repliy from you dogged my post.... i knovv im not that vvack... Peace... it had to be vvilson fisk (the first kat to peep me on this board) to shed some light vvhen my mind vvas dark and foggy... Peace this vvas ill ...
ayo...anomaly even replies to posts...comin' out the shell?...but for real i was just going to say the usual...."damn shit was i'll or felt the messeage...but since trueson didnt feel it...im gonna let you heads know why i feel it....and because you took the time to critique my verse....so here you go....
"phonetical displays plant seeds to paint a landscape
what's the deal, who's really real, and who's really the damn fake"....tight...the phonetic seeds shit was too ill and the message in the second line is always felt...cause on the real some people still dont know....
"trying to feed ego's self esteem must be on decline
i'd rather think of new styles to compile and then just recline"...shit if heads dont feel this statement then.....welll....
"learning through experience..no teacher..learn your own lessons"...thats what i try to tell these kids...you heard it here newbies......you heard it here...
"some may feel my thoghts are worthless..but for you this isn't intended"...ahem....i feel you...i could rabble about you verse for another half hour but i think this is sufficient enough....hope cats dont sleep much need message in here...i mean shit its not even coded....
but...the got it locked like pens lines is overused....but hey dont let that discourage a good message.....and flow whatever....fuck im out.....what did you say..."like 3 strikes?"...one cousin....
oh cmon just because vve're battlin Agent O doesnt mean you gotta defend vvho's post i don't like...he's a big boy he can defend himself he doesnt need you... this cat vvants to say my shit is vveak...he cant talk cause his GARBAGE is novvhere near me... i'll admit your POST vvas and is PHAT..but c'mon your telling me you liked his hooked on phonics bobberia?? gimme a break... i vvishyou trankvvuility even if you vvith me the opposite...Constant elevation....TrueSon
Yo Anomoly Dont listen to this cat, i know me and you went at it, breaking down each others post, and focusing on flaws rather than the whole piece...but yo let me comment you on this verse..this joints ill..I read it twice so i can absorb the contet, and the script is nice....so keep doing your thing..
oh god i had to stop reading this, you and your dr seuss ish... i knevv your punchlines from lifetimes past... your shit is so predictable go find perimeters cause you cant handle decimals... (my shit vvas far better than any one your CRAP...GARBAGE i said..GARBAGE.
Peace to the Realest...(Not you).
i hate when this crap posts twice...sorry yall