Yo peep dis out....tell me wutcha'll think, aiightz?
Yo, this iz juss mah second tyme postin' shit up on here, so tell me wutcha think, aiightz? thanks 2 all tha peepz who gave me propz on mah first post.....
i ain't got no time for keeping in touch with friends
gotta search fer enemies from tha beginning to the end
once again, i'm hungry and i'm feeling tha need
of sucking tha life force frum tha people who bleed
if i suceed in doing what i've come here to do
then to all playa haytaz out there I'm coming for you
deep indside tha flesh and bone you better understand
that i'm the truth where there's false at tha sound my command
withstand the heat that will engulf cities that fall
cowards die many times but da valiant stand tall
total recall and recognize tha white clouds and sunrise
climb heaven's stairways unto god's beautiful eyes
lies and cries of an individual that sins,
tha fire of tha devil enlarges hiz grins
and with all the trouble that i've been going through,
i still got business to settle, plans to ruin, beef to fix, all nothing new
if you're looking for some feedback, here it is. this was decent. it wasn't bad, but it didn't particularly impress me either. it's all good, greatness comes with time. keep practicing and reppin, skill will come and heads will recognize.
nice piece... nice flow... ish all gud...