This is "THE REAL"...
(Both verses flow to the beat of Jay-Z, In my life, Volume 1, track 14, “You must love me”)
A scared Child:
I look around and see nothingness/ clench my fist tight, hoping something is/ truly/ delivering me from the unruly……/ Forming patterns and directions, who’s the pilot in my cockpit?/ Ready to stab the next that questions my prophet and when can I stop it?/ Life’s culprit, holding on by a full grip/ dragging the detours of my life waiting to see the hull rip/ Taking everything for granted/ No responsibility, no doubt, and no accountability/ Stranded, my own knowledge never filling me/ I’m staring death in the face and it’s killing me/ Erased breaths of anger/ Can’t exhale vividly/ Got the courage of the conductor, but I play the tune of the symphony.
A strong adult:
I do this to cleanse my soul/ Climb out and cover up a senseless hole/ Pretending to be warm, when all my senses cold/ Cents or coal……doesn’t matter/ My whole life’s shattered whether I’m rich, poor, or a cadaver/ I have to be truthful…Being spoiled, I grew up in a good way/ But in the same way I have the problems the ghettos portray/ I’m highly addictive and inferiorly descriptive/ Wanting all I see not cause I haven’t had, but because I always get gifted/ While everyone changes, I remain the same/ When the fact is…that shit’s all in my brain/ Seeing things how I want, and not for what they are/ When disappointed, it kills, whether it cuts or scars/ Doing it for myself, don’t care much about the wealth/ Never to sell out, and when I’m done I get the hell out/ I can tell doubt, and smell fear/ Only because I am my peers……and I ain’t well out/ To question your ears, am I a well-rounded individual?/ Everyone likes me, but somehow I still feel pitiful/ Shit’s real critical, it’s the point in my life that’s pivotal/ I could die, or I could live it all……and I don’t wanna die/ I have to summon the energy to try, from emotions inside that I’ve pushed back to hide/ Tripping over my feet, but my laces are tied/ No more watering, so all my faces are dried/ My words are empty, but my knowledge is sounding full/ I quit relying, I hold myself accountable/ Inner strength is just mounting the white horse/ It takes devotions to ride through the right course/ Wondering if the door will open if I push with all my might’s force/ And how much longer Rap will remain my light’s source/ Not to be known by a whole name, but a part being/ Ya gonna feel why my whole shamed heart’s bleeding/ I’m cowering in the corner of the dark screaming/ With fear of detachment after I’ve done my part breathing…… Apart from seeing this world, I find it hard to believe we HAVE to be in this world.
Thanks to those who peeped...
- tha UnJust aka ChinAquA
this made my day
it was beautiful man..for real
I enjoyed this shit
This piece was mad phat. You showed that you could hit it up by bringing the mad braggadellic lines on my collab above but this shows that you've got depth son.
Good looking out in tha 2G.
One love from the NE.
Mad insights on this, Chin...damn, where ya been?..anyways, I'm most definitely feelin' this..
I'm tryin' to get a Jersey collabo goin'..so far, only Disturbance has responded....wanna call it 'Garden Statesmen'....lemme know the drilly..
..kILLUMINATIon...I'm keepin' hope a lie 'cuz it's over for you!
Nice drop, thought-provoking.
You've definately got your own style & I'm feelin it - your posts are always thought provoking. Keepem comin!
Message was Tight...
Flowed fluid...Ill transistions and rhyme schemez...Nice Touch Son...
Good Work Kid...
Feeling this Joint...
Keep blazing it...
~Second City Sunz~
sup china, hot post god, i see that you are versitile, i saw hot punches from your first round battle, and our second round bout in the tourney and now some message type sh!t,you got skill...hot son,no doubt...
It's always good to peep posts from this kid. (Well worth the read. Thanks, guy.) No doubt.
"Fuck liberty. Give me death..."
- F l a t l i n e r -
yah...i heard there was a chiniqua i think..i dont know..something like that...but im trying to change my name..peace yall...and divine..i owe ya..so im a hit ya up soon.
yo this was mos def ill ChinAqua.hit me up for a collabo.
I APOLOGIZE(APPLY LOGIC WISE) MY MAN CHINAQUA! IT USE TO BE A CHIK ON HERE BY THAT SAME NAME AND SHE LEFT.I THOUGHT YOU WERE HER.NOT SAYIN YA RHYMES ARE FEMALE!THRU AND THRU ITS A DOPE POST!PARDON SELF!
Aiyo!...before this goes any further...no disrespect to ladies, but I ain't one...ya feel
Im a start posting this fact in my signature
Yo, thank you. I really enjoyed the post. I liked readin it, can't wait to hear it, see it, feel it, etc. Tight in all perspectives, from all angles. Keep shining...
nicely put.....i felt it, your a great poet and im especially happy to know that your a female [i think], we need more of us in this bad boy, stay up mama!!1NE
VERY WELL FELT!
DOPE POST FROM,WELL I BET A BEAUTIFUL AND WELL THOUGHT YOUNG LADY!
WELCOME BACK SHALL I SAY!