God, plz..4give me...i didnt mean to kill him.....*sigh*
late-night, my eyes grew sensitive from the streetlights/ smelling like urine from the sewer pipes/ my legs became weary/ dust particles had my eyes teary/ and i was tripping, since i might've saw sumthin ghostly when i passed the cemetary/ shivering uncontrollably/ sporting a thin fleece with no gloves, i think it was 60 degrees/ dayum, juss wanted to make it home safely/ almost instantly, i heard footsteps behind me/ tried to keep my thoughts positive/ attempts to run became too addictive/before i even got in the motion to sprint/ he grabbed me by my fleece's tip/ tried to pistol-whip, but he missed/ flung me on the heavily rusted fence/ defenseless/ "my life is not gonna end, please..my life is not gonna end!!"/ i cried in my head/ i couldnt see the man/ he was rocking a jacket,with gloves and timberlands/ highly demandin'/ he put the glock to my right eye/ frozen, petrified/ the only thing visible was the evil glow in this muthafuckers eyes/
robber:"give me all your fucken cash that you got right now!! hurry the fuck up!!"
syntax:"yo, for real..i aint gotta a buck."
robber:"thats juss telling me that you like to get strucked."
he took his heat and swiped it across my teeth/ fell on the concrete/ everything swirled around me/ the lights looked like dust reflecting the streets/ ferociously, he flipped me on my stomach/ grabbed the wallet from my back pocket/ opened it/ and the smile on his face read mission accomplished/
my hard earned cash was soon to be drifted/
THAT FUCKEN MONEY BELONGS TO ME!!!!/ while he was counting the stacks/ i rushed and belted him in the back/ he dropped the gat/ still stinging from the whiplash/ i grabbed my wallet and reorganized the cash/ he gathered himself and began to wrestle/ tossed and tuggled/ i struggled to possess the gun/ hand was numb/ all of this over crumbs/ "PLOW!!!!!"/...silence/ he stumbled upon the lights and there was a dent on his chest/ i couldnt figure it out yet/ should i run or stay for the cops to check??/ an hour ago, i was surrounded by party full of life/ now dramatically, came the transition to death/ holding my breath/ area was lifeless/ the cops rolled in.."drop the gun!!! your under arrest!!!!"/ still in shock/ for a minute i had a chance to play GOD/ a single shot and a life was what i got/ how was i to explain it to my mother..my father??/ how can i look into the eyes of my sister?/ how can they live with a killer??/ still one in the chamber/ a slight thrust of my finger/ tapped the sensitive trigger/ and it was all over......
"hey!! drop the firearm immedia- "
ay yo, much luv and thanx goes to u khan for consistently peeping my stuff. mahn, i really dont know y im getting slept on, but yo its all good. man... i gotta say that some of these new cats are getting real annoying, being arrogant and ignorant, thats a bad combination. ive been here for alil over 2 months, i guess im still kinda new, but im willing to kidnap my own fucking ego and take criticisms to improve. these rookies r fucken sleeping on vets on this board like khan and many others. i honestly thought this was the best battle board out there...its still on of the best, but for the past month theres been a big bang of new wack cats thats clogging this board, wow..im alil off subject...yea im getting slept on, but its coo. imma keep posting, but im spending more time on another board. oh well, i guess ill give some shouts, cuz im bored. lol. aiight here it goes:
hades(madd nice, and madd slept on!!!!!), Khan aka prophetik poet, jwordsmith, affex, udon constantine, cobalt the infamous, cypher, and others. sorry y'all!!
Hell Yeah, This Is ILL.
I Hope This One Doesent Get Slept On, Cause Here You Display To The Fullest Those Storytellin Skillz I Commended You For Possessing, A While Back.
You And Esco Are Deffinitely My Two Favorite Storytellers On The Board. Well...Maybe The Only Two Lol
Your Talented, And I Hope You'll Recieve The Credit That You Truely Deserve.
Poetik Disciplez '2000