One of my first rhymes....i decided to post out of boredom...enjoy
one of my first rhymes.....so fergive the whackness...
yo stranded in the center of my clestial mentor/surrounded by darkness writin rhymes on the walls of my placenta/cant wait to enter the world cuz im destined to be,the most prolific emcee in mankinds history/aint nobody stopin me cuz its been foretold,its as sure as teh revolution of the globe so let it be known/all u false mc's u aint seenin the light,ol losse muthafu*$,fail to keep ish tight/i write,rhymes during the times when the lines between wrong and right are intertwined and entire peoples got the fleece over their eyes/a failure to realize,that their lives are not their lives/i can get on somee deep ish,elevate ya state of consciousness but the pilot of my minda cockpit has switched to autopilot/use knowledge and reason to part from evil like moses did the red sea/burn roses when u bury me,as i exit this insanity/it'll be a mas exodus millons of peeps screamin,________the specialist________ from the president to the homeless lyrical architechs build monuments to pay homage to my outfit/as we politic on deep topic wif logic,we cant be defeated/pledge eternal aligince to Jesus/study his teACHINS to maintain cypher completeness/ne strivin to achieve ideal social status,never base my thoughts on mathmatics my minds frequency sees no static/rappers tried but got put in a craftmantic and cant reach teh controls,now they trapped fer the duration to watch my dream unfold...
word up! That was dope for a first rhyme man...very positive too, as Udon said...I liked it!
very tight, we collabed awhile ago and this rhyme shows that you do have skill, cats sleep on you though and i don't know y...you are an ill mc onslaught
Positivity. I likes. Most emcees are looking to cut off somebody's head or whatever it takes to end their existence. I'm glad to see it's more about a play on words and self-evaluation for you. It's lyrics like these that last. Mind provocative lyrics will always hold true to this light we live in known as "hip hop". Peace.
it was aight for a first rhyme.....peep my collabo wit carribean cause we slept on and it is ill as fuck...aight??