**EVERYBODY PEEP THIS**, want comments on this one
I don't like reposts, but I really want replies on this piece (heads who have been on this site know I don't beg for replies), but I want them on this piece, might put this on wax next year. I also included a little keystyle to appease those who read this the first time, etc. I am gonna revise and add on to this piece, but might put it on wax if I get a deal next summer. Hit me up with comments, thanks. Peace.
First, a little keystyle
Here's a keystyle making opponents appear senile.
Before you face me, you better put 911 on speed dial.
In the meanwhile, get prepared for these lyrics.
Heed the warning before you proceed to hear this.
I'm two steps past crazy enough to blast babies.
Don't believe me, then you can go and ask Shady.
Taught for a second, and the class praised me.
Can't touch the skills that I've amassed lately.
Spinning brains more than my cd player with Mos Def.
You take the mic, sorry to tell you the host left.
Don't waste time trying to attack these rhymes.
Cause I'm from the future going back through time.
And now, the feature presentation:
IT WAS WRITTEN that I was to travel through time.
Use my THIRD EYE VISION and put the gavel to minds
That were restrained, all across the world's plains.
From BEHIND THE FRONT I came to free the furled brains.
I went back centuries to THE BIRTH of the planet.
Talking to cavemen watching how the people ran it.
Moving granite for them was just a DAILY OPERATION.
I warned them that people would try to stop their nation.
Went to the Fertile Crescent to relieve their STRESS.
Left Mesopotamia blessed with techniques to test.
Showed them what really existed BENEATH THE SURFACE.
They heard this and gave me praise for my service.
Continued on my BIZARRE RIDE through various eras.
Preaching in WAR ZONEs during dedications to Hera.
I took a STEP INTO THE ARENA along with gladiators.
Jumped into the future to teach universal navigators.
Stopped ignorance where it started then departed
To continue healing the souls of the brokenhearted.
Political prisoners I freed leaving them BORN AGAIN.
Reuniting children with parents that were torn from them.
Sworn to mend, I was needed cause THINGS FALL APART.
Called to start, healing people and all their hearts.
Saved Native Americans from being put on reservations.
Stopped HELL ON EARTH taking in deserted Haitians.
COAST 2 COAST I chose to oppose foes who spread evil.
BY ALL MEANS NECESSARY I saved threatened people.
Prevented the Holocaust and halted the Inquisition.
More than FORTY DAYS AND FORTY NIGHTS I was on my mission.
Opened people's eyes when they were DOWN WITH THE KING
Who promoted killing and infected the town with a sting.
Stopped fatal battles when I surrounded the ring
And showed people pleasure that good sound always brings.
Cleaned MUDDY WATERS and eliminated everybody's borders.
Stopped servants from taking their masters' nutty orders.
Gave life to the living who hoped for LIFE AFTER DEATH
And gave the depressed a taste of laughter's breath.
No masters left after I quickly ended the slave trade.
Returned to their native lands with a saved fate.
I paved way for BALANCE to be present universally.
Enlightened all people even those who cursed at me.
Happiness not HARD TO EARN, now it was automatic.
Whether it was THIS OR THAT I stopped the need for static.
Situations not tragic, no surpises from the beasts.
Dropped knowledge showing why the SUN RISES IN THE EAST.
Prevented plagues from occuring during the Middle Ages
And introduced the youth to reading with little pages.
ALL EYES ON ME as I made the world's violence cease.
Harmony set in while I soothed people playing silent keys.
People from everywhere went through a MOMENT OF TRUTH.
Children now enjoying the innocent components of youth.
Terminated all wars and stopped incidents of genocide.
Had males show love for the gifts that women provide.
SOUL FOOD for the world's people abandoned at random.
Stopped citizens taking command from those who banned men
For unjust reasons just mean men NAUGHTY BY NATURE.
Replaced evil leaders with those who were anti-haters.
Nobody smoking CHRONIC because life was so amazing.
The blazing ended with people relaxing star-gazing.
Everbody doing duties and the nations were dispute free.
AS THE WORLD BURNS people appreciated its beauty.
This peace was BUILT TO LAST until the end of time.
Spoken to all nations and people by men of rhyme.
I had created a world that was pleasing to my memory.
Nobody CRIMINAL MINDED and no HEIST OF THE CENTURY.
Unity beyond REASONABLE DOUBT between all people.
The first and only time everybody could be called equal.
"Yo Disturbance, Disturbance, get up.
You sleeping with your fucking notebook in your hands.
We gotta bounce, going to pick up the trees.
New connection since the last one got shot."
"Aight, I'll be right there."
"Hold up. Go ahead without me, I got some thinking to do."
God created Earth but we toyed with and destroyed it.
Now, we're living on a planet more like some decoy shit.
We all have to wake up and return to the essence of life.
Peacefulness between people instead of lessons of strife.
Only in dreams can I hope for a world I appreciate.
Stop killing this planet so we all don't meet its fate.
1999 C. Hopkins
Peace to all mcs
I peeped this the first time and its illness level has only increased..you know if Flatliner tolerated reading a repost than it must be ill..I got mad love for Disturbance..definitely getting the props he's always deserved...I think this was triple doses of creativity...and uniqueness
The lp titles and concept of the rhyme was mad ill...Plus the way you formatted it..Love to ya hon..
Keep in touch..so we can collab on the lp
Peace and Love
*Pretty much just nods his head in agreement with XXL* "The one thing I have to say is..this piece nice as fuck as it is..ain't quite done it's about 99% done..now you've laid the skeletal work, and it's perfect..you've got the walls up...(cause shit is mad relevent) props for that too..now sit down and think of how to flip some metaphors, wordplay puns etc... like that one line you could do "My THOUGHTS are BLACK cause my ROOT's etc...than as I watch THINGS FALL APART..when you finish with that..RECORD THIS BITCH!!!!!!!..this is an ill concept and took a lot of work, be rewarded for it son..I WILL BE WAITING..naaimean??
yo..I think I peeped this the first time..but..I gotta say it was mad tight!!!!
Definately LP worthy!!!!!!!
Yo I think XXL wrapped it all up
Dual history for sure,civilization and hip hop
Damn this was fuckin' ill kid, now I think about how elementary some of my shit seems compared to this..........
Yo wilson fisk, whats up, glad to see you frequent the board a lot now (even if you aren't posting often), need a lot of true heads to stay here. It wasn't supposed to be in any type of order, as you said I started going in order, but just like a dream, I jumped around, nahmean.
Aight, I'm out now, be back on later to peep some posts, peace
one of the illest posts i've peeped no doubt. i liked how you worked two concepts at the same time. showed that you put mad thought into this. definitely album worthy.
Definitely put it down D...
Superb. Excellent Hypothetical Sense. And Uplifting Rhyme. WOrdplay Just Everything. Classic Post. Tax And Wax This. PEACE
(This ran hard with the flow, kid. Like XXL said, it's production material, as well. Like Forest Gump said, "I like it a lot..." Like I always say, "No doubt.")
(((pEaCe))) ...to the power levels striving to reach mine.
UNi~VeRsATiLe MoVeMeNT '99,
F l a t l i n e r
this was nice, as i said last time...that keystyle was phat too!!! tha speed dial like with 911 was ill
Ill lil keystyle...
think you already know what I think of your feature presentation...
1 to you AND ALL OF THE JERSEY THICKNESS...
...death to the ILLUMINATIon...I keep hope a lie 'cuz it's over for you!
"I went back centuries to THE BIRTH of the planet.
Talking to cavemen watching how the people ran it."...ayo...the world started with amino acids in a cess pool...other than that the quick nutshell of humanities history was on point...
was it suppose to be in some sort of an order...because it was at first and then it started to jump a little bit from time period to time period...but then again it is a dream and anything goes in a dream.....anyways...its a coo concept no doubt...keep reppin...ummm...nahmean..(is that it)lol...one hundred
this was an ill ass concept bro'...usually when emceez try shyt like this, the drop suffers cause they can't create anything relevant within the restraints. I think very few would be able to pull this off with that level of lyricism sun...........this reads as a dual history lesson, taking us through the history of the world in one respect and yet at the same time giving us a crash course in Hip-hop 101 by noting some of the most influential lps and single releases of our time.......big upz....I'm feelin' and loving this.....
sorry...so fukking sorry I didn't peep this the first time, but this is definitely an album-worthy cut
overall I'd say $$$$1/2 out of a possible 5
please keep reppin'...you are mad talented
its been done