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OKAY FIRST OFF IVE ONLY BEEN DOING THIS SHIT FOR 2READ THAT 2 FUCKIN DAYS..NEVER TRIED BEFORE IN MY LIFE...SO IF U THINK YOUR HOT SHIT TALKING CRAP TO A BEGINNER ...SUCK A NUT...SECONDLY HOW DO U BITCHASS'S EXPECT ANYONE TO GET BETTER WHEN ALL YOU DO IS YAP YOUR LIPS....HOW BOUGHT SOMETHING CONSTRUCTIVE...UR FUCKIN PITIFULL...GET A LIFE OR GO KILL YOURSELF EITHER WAY FUCK U
Yo I think the internet is a good place for beginners, on the grounds that it forces you to focus on your text and text alone, and you can perfect that. The other parts of emceeing, the vocal delivery, stage presence, etc. are all things you polish once you got lyrics. And most of the time (unless you rhyme about shit that gets heads in an uproar, like mr. messiah here)you get criticism. And good or bad, its always better to have outside input, some feedback. So if a young turkey puts out something bad here, worst case scenario, everybody hates it and says so, and thats that. You go onstage frontin wit that same lame shit, you get chastised in person. The internet gives you the safety of distance. All I'm sayin is that the internet's good for polishing text, think of it as a tool for the artist. And if you gotta tool, how you gonna not use it? But really messiah, in the future, you should think about using this tool with more respect for the rules, particularly the one about dont post non rhymes. Oh yeah, to avoid posting soo goddam much, I suggest you clump shit together. I get the feeling that your three rhymed posts were all keystyled on the spot, simply because the subject matters all the same, and why would you post three mini paragraphs when you could put it all together as one post? Now if you HAD done that, youd have a ok sized post, not huge, but not a goddam verbal quickie like how it is now. But I wanna expand on Mikes advice; Yes, write rhymes everyday, more than one, shit, as many as is feasible. Post, but post plenty. Alotta the rookies come with rhymes that are way too short to judge, then its a wastrel of a post. And yeah, dont post every lil rhyme you kick. Oh yeah one more thing, Peep. Peep other rhymes and learn how they do, and by their replies, see what heads think of this or that. All these things will help you get clser to the poet inside you.
I'm not really feelin the armageddon thing. Maybe its me, maybe its just 1999, but apocalyptic is just contagious these days.
That was mad ignorant to say, Disturbancem he needs practice. IF we are true to hip hop and we are older heads, then we know that he is going into battle out there with no type of skill or format, at least le the lil G work on his shit here. Then when he gets into a battle out there he'll at least stand a chance. Otherwise he'll never learn. You gotta school lil man not shit on him.
First, beginners should not be posting on the internet, practice in the real world, and when your skills get better, come on the internet, and then you can build from there. But beginners should definitely not be posting on the internet.
Secondly, don't post anything that isn't a rhyme. EVER.
Third, I help people get better with constructive criticism. But as I said, beginners shouldn't be here. Practice first, I never rhymed on the net til I had been writing for years.
never post something that isn't a rhyme again
aight now your posting a million times a day. you shall be convicted of that crime. you posted shit that wasn't even in rhyme form. you shall be convicted of that crime. you are garbage, you shall be convicted of that crime. yo, I could give a fuck less how long you been rhyming for, it could be 2 day's or a hundred, at least come correct. if your gonna post here put thought into it and not the shit you put into your rhymes now.and how are suposed to get better?hmmm, that dont take no rocket scientist, fuckin write a rhyme everyday and dont post it until you got somethin decent at least not on this board. too much garbage as it is. no peace just for shit talkin, and I should rip but your not worth me calling you out...it's your call, what's it gonna be?!?
Second City Sunz.....Who can test us?!?
I'm sorry if i offended you.
Wouldn't want you to kill yourself or nothin.