See the Streets, Be the Streets, only when you in da Streets
Chattering flowing through the state of N.J.
con: yeah yo, i seen to many wack ass muthfuckers trying to rip here on some bullshit and then their Friends hooking them with replys damn god i know is underground but stop hating on other niggaz and start riping some real hip hop for real though niggaz only talk bout battling and half these snakes dont be rattling (raping) if not that they just add in punchlines out of
yo yo yo with these heavy lights in your eyes -- even in the past -- ya couldnt see the mistakes ya made -- couldnt even prevent the your rap career crash -- honestly my goal for the media to describe me from my ash -- even though half these homos say i aint keeping it real yo -- me and rap dont seperate no blood contain but we like real bros -- he get jumb fucks up his shirt --suddenly my back naked from no clothes --keep my rap hot stack my books stub in stoves -- but the real glow i see it -- ya think im conceited i guess so i be it -- but the legendary of me yo i wanna meet it -- i could expound on my thoughts -- but till i get major label call on that rap i put it on stall -- focus on the anybody -- give me a 25 to life sentence -- cuz in the begining of my paragraph i dont indent it -- i guess this is in -- to add different fonts and let your shit win -- half the readers minds deattached -- in my book the number one rap sin -- see what you read -- you try to copy it and your rap gets impede -- slowing the progress of the brain cant comprhende how it feels to bleed -- cuz you used to have flow like the sea -- but now the majority exclude the minority has stolen your seeds -- you see the theme is -- you can still flash but keep the rotation on high beams while you riding in your beamers -- collab or whateva rolling with the teamers -- spit the real shit and get flatter -- But the real truth ya groups only equal one emcee and dont get better
Chosen Out the Nation
This was aight, you jumped around without much transition in some lines. Not bad though, one thing, you should try to avoid overrhyming things like "be it" with "see it" or "real yo" with "real bros". Try to switch it up like "see shit" with "be it" or "real bros" with "steel flows", rhyming both words without repeating one, nahmean. Keep reppin