Short sample of my freestyle/poetics style
This was about my father getting locked up..
Its not sad cause he was a dead beat drugie for a father...
Internally i conceive the birth of a new idea/through mental anguish,and a dysfunctional life revealed/as i once concealed the pain/contained my wisdom for better days/from far away/gun shots rain/in memories like it was yesterday/can you hear the shell shocked cry?/eternal soldiers forgotten by this common days demise/drug induced,child abuse/the innocence is lost/middle class slangin so i cant pay the capitalists costs/a money laundering government trying to conform the unorthadox/they put my father in lock down/so hide the pot and the profits from the po po and bump the raps load/cause were a socitey who needs quotes to survive/like american history x ima leave on a quote/"fly high whats real cant die"/
THis is Nice Dun...
I was feelin it...Short and Sweet...
Can Dig it...
Keep Droppin It son...
~Second City Sunz~
Nicely put...Poetic and good word usage...
The Poetic Disciplez
Short, but on point like frozen tits... That's my word. Yo, hit me up at "Mistah Chips@AOL.com". I want to talk to you.
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This was pretty tight. could have been longer, but nice for what u got. more like a deep poetry.
~PROPHECY aKa DaRk LoGiC~99