I DONT EXPECT GREAT REPLY'S JUST SPAZZING ON ILLITERATIONS
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just goin nuts on this one
honestly ... i wasnt feelin this yo.... i heard this done a bunch of times... once performed at a show an it was maaad ill.... this was aight... but i dint really feel it naimean... anyways.. stay up yo... peace
nice yo. I liked the use of vocabulary.
Universal Contagion 99____
This is Nice son...
Played this topic Nicely...
Keep Droppin It...
Nice Vocab...Overall Flow as well...
Keep Doin it...
~Second City Sunz~
mail, u got mail, mail, you got mail.. sorry!
nice shit yo, i can relate & i give you much love. keep it real playboy ya herd me?
You are the alphabet serial killer that I read about on the post office billboard. I'm not gonna turn you in because I've been charged guilty for harassin' a couple of letters in my day too. But that's another story. My sentence was for stickin' up consonants.
Prior proper planning prevents piss poor performance. Elastic emissions extend to enormous. Bust on busters like Bullwinkle would bust on Boris. Kick the Chorus. Fire fighter flick the flame on forrest...
Tight ass post
Dope post, keep shynin' on 'em with shit like this and maybe The Heights will see some light. Yo, email me, how old are you?
A critique just makes you a better emcee its just whether you're smart enough to use it to your advantage!!!
(Washington Heights 4ever)
I forgot to mention some shit...
I loved the whole concept. You basically killed the whole fucking alphabet. Shifting from letters to letters. That was what made this piece so ill (and I forgot to mention it). Shit. I know, I know. I re-read this post, and what I didn't understand was:
"so i kill and ketchup splats"...
When I read this, I was just like, "Yeah?", haha, but then I re-read the line right before it. I'll identify it as the "i-line". A couple of subordinating conjunctions couldn't hurt this rhyme. It would make it alot more understandable. Link your shit, kid. You had alot of run-on sentences as well. Nuff. I'll catch'a later. Peace, god.
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Damnit! I was re-reading my feedback, checking for spelling errors, until I recieved one of those son of a bitch, "WAOL Error's", & I was forced to close out. Now, I have to re-type all.
Anyway,the level of vocabulary was fucking amazing on this piece! As for the wordplay, Jesus-Mary-&-Joseph! If you come any more complex, these heads are going to literally open your post(s) with dictionaries! Seriously, that's a good thing (in a way).
However, I'm going to be honest with you, god. There we a couple of lines I didn't understand. It's not that I couldn't comprehend them, I just don't think they made sense. Hopefully, you just drew a blank & scribbled something down. Maybe, I'm just trippin', and can't grasp it. If so, I apologize. I'm not exactly "accusing" you of anything. Just to make that clear...
:::copies & pastes what in this text-box:::
As for this, "vv" in replacement of the "w" thing. That was quite interesting. I'm not going to say you're "wack", or call you a "herb", because that's your style. I wouldn't be surprized if the smart-ass MC's harrassed you for this, or sleep on ya. That's fucking ridiculous. They're the ones that don't get the pleasure to peep you anyway's. Fuck them.
But I'm ghost. Peace, god. Keep postin', for sure. I'll look for your name. No Doubt.
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