A bunch of word that sound good
i'll be dropping pennys from 20 storie from overhead/ every cent aimed towardsur heard/watch ur step/n don't blink/befor u can say rp/ i already took ur acl and slaped u in the face with it/forget throwing the book/i'll toss the whole libary/if u didn't die from the paper cuts i'll burn ur eyes out with my cig. butt/i'll sever ur head with a rusty sword/then set ur head some where u can see/then set ur body ablaze/then i'll tape 20 free cellular phones to ur dome/wait a few mins.for the canceres waves to creep into ur brain
Keep Practicin Man. You Had The Right Idea It Just Seemed Rushed. PEACE.
Peace to ds, ha ha my sintaments exactly. You need to take more time with your metaphors and all. This post seemed to rushed to me, and hastly thought out. I have alot more to say, but i'll just say, try again for now.
i really wasnt feelin this... im only replyin so you know someone read this aight... peace