ILL KNOCK YA F*CKIN TEETH IN.....ZUB_ONE
Ill grab the mic and rip heads clean and leave clavicles danglin/
Stranglin Zub with enough pressure till his eyeballs is hangin/
Rip shit like a Decatholan while you was Going for broke in the Special Olympics/
And when I eclipse your spotlight Ill display you for degenerates/
Any emcee could fit the target and wouldnt push they budget/
One size fits all.....and it aint "not my type" would be the smartest/
Im grapplin skulls and fracturin thugs with literary thrusts/
Squeezin like fruits to the loom and blowin contests with wind gusts/
My mic will gash-UR-ass like T-2000s from shotgun blasts/
Then graze the substitute with enough range to burn his Cut an paste tasks/
U couldnt touch me If we was duelin at thumb wrestling/
In fact....I bet you couldnt rip If I was in the pass Gas section/
Im stompin Butts like Cons last Dayz on death row/
Going in knife fights like armed Rambos cutting you from the temple.../
to the nostril/
Ill step in the ring battlin 10 of the illest men with 9 lives/
Gouge they eyes with Archives and scream this is 90 of the wackest True lies/
Im bustin-kick-in-the ass specials rippen ya panthoses/
SMashing pretty-boy poses jabbing through your head for holdin grudges/
Ill battle you( ZUB& Molotov) on the circumfrence of a JOLLY RANCHER SQUARE/
Lacirate the body and wait to rip the REINCARNATED SPARE/
FUCK YOU..... Ill smash asses like tight chairs and bullemics/
Pull these cotton heads across velcro rings and even the ATHEUS WOULD BE BELIEVIN/
CYPHER.....Ummmm fuck it...U KNOW WE WOULDnt WANT TO START YOU/
Like you mark......My ass will test ya ruggedness like 2-ply-tissue/
Knockin heads off apparatuses like snipers in patient stages/
Rippen spaces cause new heads shaken to CHallenge cypher rages/
Im flippen kids/
spittin to erase herbs with precisencess/ fight like biblical heroes/
flingin rocks at forheads till knees are nimble/
flooring loudmouths like Hoover/
specialist to sever the head while your body is still MOVING/........
Yo, I liked this. Sorry I slept on it yesturday though. Peace
cypher, my man...hit 'em harder...some personal type shit...youknowhatimean...
trueson...agreed...I simply wasn't feelin it...that's my taste god...plus that shit that I qouted didn't make sense to me.
yo madness you dont need rhymes to come one after the other , that's his style god , like vvhen i have alot of vvords vvithin rhymes its because they need to be there to make the rhymes connect and make sense , like minorities spendin dough on avirex ,300 dollars or maybe less , open your vvisdom cause its surpressed.
ill post yo,
"smash asses like tight chairs to Bulemics"aren't bullemics thin?, "fling rocks till knees are knimble"knees being nimble? maybe legs.
"floor you like a Hoover(Vacuum) what does a vacuum floor?""
I don't understand...I guess you're too deep for me. I was not feelin it. It did not flow to me either...I thought there were too many words between rhymes. Call me out if you want...I wish I got constructives like this...cuz I could just say..."You're wack" or "You're a herb" and by virtue of this rhyme, I'd be justified in doing so.
no offense...but that shit was very luke warm.. you wrote a battle rap and just threw his name in were it fit accordingly...that's shit's lame man...this is even to sub-one..this is a rhyme about you and you threw his name in ...one word.....WEAK!!
damn... what have i missed?? ...ill
"One size fits all.....and sayin its "not my type" would be the smartest/
Second City Sunz