Some true ish. you dun like? well that your fauly.. One Love to all..
(*Yo son? Can you drop another ill rhyme; To take it easy & just kill time?*) x2
-=-I'll see what I can do for ya'll.-=-
I'm a give you something basic; Some piece of cake shit ( MmMm. )
So lit up you cannot even face it; but me i'm eligible, I made it ( look at me? )
See how easy you can swallow it go head dun be afraid it's good if I ate it ( go head try a piece? )
If you dun like my shit cuz i'm white, then you must be racist? ( NoOoOo! )
Even though I'll still come prepared with Johnny Cochran to take my case
Useing bigger words than Jesse Jackson make you look like a midget in the circas ( hey lil feller! )
With little ankles that can't support this; But still stronger than the bearded lady u can hurt this ( arhh. )
I'll walk around with my stick figure fesique shirt less; scrawny arms like a lil squirt is.
I jumped in the television with a hatchet; chopped of both Norman Bates legs cuz i'm whiter than tha magic ( i'm not albino! )
He is now confined to the term go go gadget; he on a hot temper like he just about to go "I had it" ( oh no! )
He walking gimp with a wooden pole's for his legs'; took both those and beat him worse than Rodney King with pegs ( OwWw. )
I beat him so violently he had no chance to involuntary beg; so we'll say he beat him self up and give him two full kegs ( here ya go. )
So after the attack we fed him some phosphate pills and 2 cups of Drano; he was puking up more colors of the colors of the rainbow
He now a crippled freak and he is the main show; but from this ability what will he gain though? ( who cares )
He just a bald headed freak bitch gett'n cat scans for any signs of keamo; get this he slit his wrist by jumping straight out a 2inch thick glass pain window (stupid fuck. )
(*Aiight here -=- u almost happy?*)
Hide my self in a basket and disappear like Makaveli; you just a afraid of the two cum stain's I left on the upper part of your belly ( I shot you )
I lubricate the mic cord like my voice is 100% K-Y jelly ( rub it in real good. )
Can no one fuck wit me with a dick bigger than Dirk Diggler; walking like a he-man but a body of a stick figure ( I can't even draw them. )
You all seriously fucked up if you think Powder is a ni**er; he not, he just the whitest mutha fucking blank whigger ( he sOoOo white )
Sorry madam,but fuck what Sadam said; I'll rip thoughts fucking big lips off and use them for a bobsled ( wEeEeE )
Too much to think about got my mind roasting like beef too much of a hot head ( that to hot for me! )
I'll flow with anyone for fun but only two at a time like Noah; spit rhymes real fast to see who writes slowa ( MeEe! )
Mic blowah, this ain't a porn show; we'll trace spit sharp like razor's till we see who gets worn down slowa
Is there a rumor; that my shit grows on you like a tumor? ( Dun cut it off yet. )
You can't be real in this rap game if ya can't take a lil' humor ( Word. )
So yall get's ready to play in my playground; if ya dun like it you can suck my dick if ya can't hang or stay down ( Bitch. )
I'll be forced to fold you up in a bag of luggage and send you on a one way trip to wackville on the Greyhound......
Just wanted to have fun.. i wanna give shout out to peeps. that been wit me for a while in this room, and some new peeps that i met that are madd cool as fuck..
Big shout Kgb ( fo chill'n and making fun of me, on a posative level),grafic1,onslaught(spark),Desertstorm,finetik,ill x,2 ill,F L A T L I N E R ( who i respect for makeing honest opinions ),CriminOLOgy,beergut,disturbance (talked to him few times), Naiea,formless (i'll be waitnig fo a shout out on tha radio son? lol jus mess'n)H&@D C@$E,agent orange, Fozzit,Collaberate (got me started in this ish),mikeskills,Mr.chips,Theory (i noticed replied to everyone of my post, much love kid),udon constantine,THE NEW ESCO,and syntax, and for who ever else i misse dyou knwo who you are..
Yo thanks for the shout out...thats mad nice...and I appreciate it...what does ya name mean sun..kinda different and I like it...love the post...its got some fire adn range to it..some passion to it..so ill
and dopely deep. Anyways..I'm leaving the board and you seem mad cool peeps..it would have been great to get to know you better....I like to spread love and happiness to all those I meet..just ask anyone here..Well sending love and wisdom your way... I'm leaving the board for good..but that doesn't mean I'm not down for collabs..care to tango with the former goddess...
I bless to manifest the best and nothing less...with loving care
I think I know the meaning behind your name...anyways, overall this was dope...but I noticed you paraphrased some lines that were used by the most beautifullest m.c.(k. murray) on epmd's k.i.m.:
"...using bigger words than Jesse Jackson.."
& "I'll flow with...two at a time like Noah.."
on a final note, keep it reppin'...
"...death to the ILLUMINATIon...I keep hope a lie 'cuz it's over for you!"
The parenthesis really added to this post kid. Ill kid! Some Eminem like type shit. Hit me up with a verse at Kikogray@aol.com when you got the time.
"i gave you something basic/
some piece of cake shit"
that flowed nicely yo, lighthearted and worth the time i spent reading it. my advice?? type a lil slower and work on spelling. it just makes it easier on the eye.
word to kgb's advice.
it'll come kid, give it time. manifest.
Grinna aka Tha Smyle Cracker.
yEah... like fiNNy said, those captions added to the verse.
But I felt in another way, it may have detracted from its potency level. (Don't over-do the technique cuz you'll end up over-tainting the content. There isSSssSs... a such thing as... too much of a good thing, ya know.) Last thing ya wanna do when ripping it is coming repititious. Verse was pretty cool though. Time makes perfect. Fuck practice. Do that.
"Fuck liberty. Give me death..."
- F l a t l i n e r -
i wasnt feeling the first few verses to tell the truth.. but this could be something i would have to hear, i do like the em style and some of your lines were nice, trying using bigger vocab,and getting on some dif topics. but all in iall it was ok
thanks for the shouts
Sup kiDem, yo thanks for the shout, I enjoyed this light hearted peace pretty funny, I liked the em style background voice, over all some pretty nice shit, keep droppin.