Yo guys hit me off wit some feed backs on this..aights..thx..
aights..y'all im jus tryin to experiment around wit rhyme scheme and rhyme pattern..so lemme know how this came out..aights..peace..
circulate as i elevate up the sky like hungry vultures//
my hotness, decintegrate synopsis then scorch scriptures//
my poetry like pottery, i mold verses wit bold letters to
i blast wit enhanced gadgets, my antics burns intestines worse
my scheme, shatter fiends, damage genes, verbs that slice thru
like lazer beams//
velocity like charlie sheen, movin fast, i cant be seen//
supernatural, my arsenal collides molecule, i be the ill human being//
metaphors, sharp as claws, lockin jaws//
wit 5 lines that blast like nines when i add four//
i come raw, kick doors, give niggaz more of what they bargain for//
i spit a quick one, the outcome, in a blink of an eye he's left dead layin
on the floor//
i reign, bring the pain, as i rain like meteors//
im rare, fake's lives i dont spare, extinction level on these fools is high//
demonstrate as i deminish, finish, whack lyrics, used as target
practice, cause i hold the golden eye//
the world is mine, illuminate and shine, cause my style mystifies//
rocked spots as i shock and electrify//
raid the airwaves wit lyrical grenades//
im thoroughbred, the dead, i animate//
leave emcees chockin, wit not enuff oxygen, needin room to ventilate//
meditate witta sick mind state, then levitate//
ya get denied, crucified so i could test your faith//
case close, i blaze portfolioes, so there's no debate.............
for this to be a "new" style you seemed to pull it off pretty nicely, I say keep developin it
This is pretty nice...
Seemed scattered at times...
Connect ya sentences a lil betta...
Sound a little ConfRyhmed...
You ended with a Nice Punch...
Keep Banging It...
~Second City Sunz~