Naiea's departure (don't go)
as an emcee feelings get tossed to the side/
my plans to overtake the board, denied/
the love, where I reside/
as soft as wind echoes/
the mind let goes/
of old teachings/
in exchange for these new preachings/
I give my soul for Naiea's revival/
but there isn't any survival/
she has knelt down to her rival/
stand tall and keep your head up/
it got me fed up/
don't give in, fight it till the end/
continue to make titanium emcees on this board bend/
an ear they lend/
when you post, eyesight-illusions, becomes blury/
mind races with fury/
damn a female emcee with such skill/
power of will/
to stand as the true godess and still/
make others resign/
rhymes like an architectural design/
perfection, based up on a post/
let me be the first to say you could've been this board's host/
(no comment, post speaks for itself)
"Fuck liberty. Give me death..."
- F l a t l i n e r -
How yall know she leavin.....
Well this is a tight post.....
Anyway I still got ya verse but Im waitin for the others....keep strong..
Keep blessing this board Naiea, don't give up no matter the odds of your troubles.
(Lets let niggas see the light and the light we shall see)
Peace!(and don't rest in it)
A critique just makes you a better emcee its just whether you're smart enough to use it to your advantage!!!
(Washington Heights, NYC 4ever)