Immensely Vast Ocean (Full Version) its time...
This Ocean (HipHop)is vast/
Covering area fast/will it last/
Mastering this technique/is what I seek
These words splash land harder than movement of tectonic plates/
Stillness strays at light-speed rates/
Smashing through flood gates/
Language spoken demonstrates my will/to instill/
and completely fulfill/self to stand on the top of the hill/
Cruising at millions of lyrical miles day to day/
Chillin' while I play in the spray of my ship/
I keep a tight grip/on the mic as I rip/
Battling waves and storms until I see sun/
I like a lotta things but love one/
Hence, I search for the island oasis/
This is how I see shit on my basis/
Time will tell if I hit land with the mic in my hand/In this immensely vast ocean, Understand?
This ocean of hip hop is immense/
Commence prior artists for this opportunity/
Community has been created for us to ball/
All should stand tall and not fall/ X4
Rhyme rolls off the tongue like a tsunami/
With text forming an art like origami/
Wind generates energy for propulsion/
Forcing currents out through expulsion/
With plenty of open Ocean to roam/
Scanning for my spot to make home/
These waters I comb/like the beach/
My reach thriving to teach and to preach/
Pretentious word/Wrench this herd/
Of followers like a bolt/The herd novice like colt/Sending the volt through liquid/
Stick kid/to this sick bid/I'm makin'/
Its risk takin'/Gotta get that ice breakin'/
In order to move on/and get gone from monotny/can't stop me/out here in the immenesely vast ocean/
You may drown if you stop that treadin'/
Into the next life you'll be headin'/
Threadin' the needle in order to Pierce like Paul/
With water in your lungs your heart will stall/
Blindly fall relaxed in here cause its warm/
And thats leathal when sharks below swarm/
So keep your head outta your ass/
Or life could flash right pass your sight/
I strongly urge not to lift mass more than your might/
You'll be sinkin/Simultaneously thinkin' "I shouldn't have fucked around in this immensely vast ocean"/
Chorus fades out...
I liked it for the content..
Good to see some people still think...
ayo...e.a...that shit was pretty coo...youve really elevated your pieces...no doubt...this cat has alot of heart....he/shes been here for awhile now and everyone sleeps...even me...but this cat is learning...youre getting there...but again this is just my two cents...knowhatimean...maybe you think your the best...(i mean elegantarrogance...you know)...in that case what the fuck does my comment matter....nice read e.a.
ayo big upz for not saying..."come peep"....and big ups for posting and posting and posting...and big upz for not givin shouts....(seriously) you should only give shouts to a certain few....and thats for you to choose...keep 'em commin' one