Do I have battle raps? Critisism Please.
Affordable Ethics, My Skar-Skeptix will direct hits
until your NECK-shifts,
Complex spits, to "Holy" fathers Sticking Revolvers
down your throat, when I 'Bless'-shit/
Contest this? and get wrecked like vehicle accidents
happening at zero gravity,
Tragically, taking this microphone and slicing bone
with the cords, the whole mentality/
Control fatalities, disperse verbs with cursed words
showing satanic scripture,
Profanic pictured, of me slicing 'talent' and being
violent, dicing the hands thats 'gifted'/
Pannin-mixtures, one dose of a feeble mind
an three cups of evil lines,
Equal rhymes, you've dicussed as i combust your
skull in 9.9, lethal designs...
In atomic ingredients, stab me and i'll bleed sense
from what my cd invents,
Seating Gents, in the battlezone as i'm grab the
chrome, and decapitiate,herbs who test/
Reflectin' my thought 'projection', but when you
step in, its just "transparencies",
Comparing me, to the opponents like musical
sonnets to classical rarities/
Using intellectual thought connectin' each
brought word to your thorax,
Poor chap, you couldn't "step" to me, so now
your my fukkin' 'door-mat'!!/
Yo, A little Note. To Crimson And A.O, I will post it up later tonight,or tommorow.
And love go's to the people reading, Flatliner,Wilsonfisk,Naiea,Crimson ect.
Wait....Ok...I don't know who posted this...But I didn't...This one and one other I didn't post...I posted the One on the Collab for Heatseakers and some others...but like 2 posts that where on here...Weren't mine...The original Damien77th AKA Scizzor Bladez---I usually post my shit wit a Capitol D
This was a tight flow and lyrically on point, but in a battle, you gotta come with more hard-hitting punchlines. Still nice with yours, just think you should add some raw, in the face ish with some dope punchlines. Keep reppin.
Good Flow, but I wouldnt call that a battle rap. You didn't dog anyone at all in it but amybe I have a misunderstanding of the word battle rap (I'm pretty new to the board).
you gotta try to degrade em and out do them.
I'll give you a friendly battle if you want..? I ahve all these mixed up lines for battle rhymes in my head and I wanna get em out but I don't wanna waste em.
this was nice, you've got a sick flow, your first post on the heatseekeres joint was off da hook though.