ElegantArrogance VS. Kung Fu.......You chose a victor
This is a battle from Freestyling.com but it only got two reply's so I'm postin' it here too
I warn before you drop/that you should stop/
You're gonna catch a brain aneurysm/
For you can't maintain my lyricism/
What you gonna do/with fuckin' kung fu?/
You tryin' to make a bid/as the next karate kid?/
I flip your lid/exposing your interior/
Showcasing to the world its inferior/
Clearly I'm superior/You made a big mistake/
I did just take/any dignity you had/
Its sad/but necessary to make it this bad/
You asked for a battle/But didn't know you asked to be rocked from Boston to Seattle/
This is child's play like a rattle/
You gonna go tattle to mommy and daddy you got beat up/
I'm just tryin' to keep my feet up/above hot water/
My mission is to slaughter/opposing emcees/
Mission completed since I droppped these bars
now how yall tryin to vote/when you aint even heard what i wrote/lyical skills float thru tha air/strangle ya throat/most realize that i paralyze mcs twice my size/vocalize on this verse, get you lyrically circumsized/now comes tha true battle/fuck seattle/i move past tha pacific ocean n take ya style as collateral/so you must be tha one who made tha mistake/fuckin wit a verbal dictionary that's controllin ya fate/cant catch no breaks kid/except for some on ya face/like tyson fuckin up some suckas before he caught tha rape case/i contort styles to fit tha genius implanted in me/cant you see i bust you and ya cohorts from here to infinity..................................
Elegant Arrogance had a pretty good rhyme thing going for him, but I didn't like the flow much, still good stuff.
Kung Fu I was feeling yours more but it was way------------ too short, it was nice but make it longer and then it'll be a good battle, even though I liked yours better, I ahve to give the match to Elegant Arogance cause he had better length.