PLEASE CHECK "THE ONE AND ONLY" THEN GIVE COMMENTS.
ME AND TECK HIT THE COLABO/ GRAB THE LYRICAL LASSO/ THEN WE WRANGLE/ ANY ASSHOLE THAT GIVES US HASTLE/ YOU'RE A SERF ON MY LAND/ I BE THE KING OF THE CASTLE/ YOU TRIED TO STUDY MY FLOW/ BUT COULDN'T MATCH IT LIKE CROSS-COLORS/ WE SEND ALL THESE WACK NIGGAS RUNNIN' HOME TO THEIR MOTHERS/ GOT LOVE FOR MY BROTHERS/ ESPECIALLY BLACK TECK/ WITHOUT ALL OF HIM/ HALF OF MY MENTALITY IS ABSENT/ AND NOW YOU'RE PEEPIN' THE TWO MOST ILLEST HUMAN BEINGS/ ONE LOVE TO THE MOTHERLAND/ PEACE TO MY EUROPEANS/ I'M NOT EVEN MAD AT YOU/ I JUST SIT AND LAUGH AT YOU/ WE'RE LIKE N.W.A./ BUT NOT Niggas With Attitude/WE'RE Never Without Authenticity/ YOU THINK YOU'RE DISSIN' ME BUT YOU'RE MISSING ME/ FUCK TIME AND EVENTS/ CAUSE I'M THE ONE WHO WROTE HISTORY/ TECK IS MY DAY/ AND TO HIM I AM THE NIGHT/ THE ONLY TIME THAT WE GET IN A FIGHT IS WHEN WE WRITE/ CAUSE IT'S CONTRIVERSIAL/ THESE FATAL RHYMES CAN PUT YOU IN A HEARSE, YOU KNOW/ SPONTANEYUS AND TECK ARE "THE ONE AND ONLY"/ AND I'M THE FIRST TO BLOW THIS SHIT UP/ MY JOINTS MAKE YOU WANNA GET UP/ WE BATTLED YOUR CREW/ THEN VERBALY YOUR WHOLE CLIQUE GOT LIT UP/ I BE "THE ONE"/ BLACK TECK IS "THE ONLY"/ MC/ THAT I CONSIDER AS MY DOWN TRUE HOMIE/ CATS CAN NEVER HOLD ME/ BUT SO MANY WANT TO END ME/ AYO TECK/ PICK IT UP/ I HOPE YOU'RE READY TO DEFEND ME.
I HOPE YOU'RE READY TO SHOW 'EM HOW.
NOW IT'S YOUR TURN TO SHOW 'EM HOW IT'S GOIN' DOWN.
aight the tecknikal wordsmith-the most superb with verbal twists-Teck inflict mental conflict with verses tipped in arsenic-hittin at you quick with words reequipped-ya mic slipped and now youre losing ya hand grip-blood drip over the brains microchip-shitty emcees now in flimstrips-but the Rhyme Tecknician rewrote the script-smash the cam with the tongue wip-bodybags zipped-lick blood from the corner of my lip-mind click frame shake like an opium adict all too tragic-situation problematic-u better stay statical or you'll be next to have it-step 2 hard to predict ya situation toxic-pornographic emcees-tragically i be slayin these-mendin brains who tried to stop this-cause the quick quicker and the quickest couldn't beat this sickest lyricist ever to flip this-emcees can either get out my path or catch my wrath-the choice is non negotioable-im a scientist without the lab so do the math-my craft is unapproachable-Teck is a geothermal nuclear warhead engineered to be highly explodable-equip with zero sensitivity so dont say shit to me cause im easily provokable-once i blow the impact couldn't be measured in integers or multiples-if rap were straps i be banned in 50 states otherwise unotable-the fully automatic burner whos clips are quickly unloadable-tecknikal combos come at u like poison tipped arrows from my crossbow-my verbal salvo inflict sorrow can't see me cause i lurk in my own shadow-turn up ya bass and hear my flow echo from here to pluto-hit me hard like a collision of kinetic energy but im elastic-niggas go plastic when i hit em wit rhymes buryin emcees in a casket-the black hole enough power to pull past it-telekinesis thesis to make niggas speak this don't ask it-im blowin minds like an engine gasket-slit throats that denotes my reactions are drastic-emphaticly a million rulers together and you still couldn't measure me-my rhymes flow like currency from the national treasury-spittin spicy lyrical devestations like it was curry-catchin all angles and spit crazy wit blindin fury-spit sharply to leave niggas cryin from verbal castration-the denomination proclamaition to leave niggas in frustration-burn minds sever nerves and ruin lungs from inhalation-of my lyrical smokescreen the 1 and ONLY leavin niggas blind in observation!
dont beg for your replies, thats fuckin pussy, 'if your good the will come'......
spontaneyus: loose the caps lock and the last half of your post and you might get somewhere
the both of you flow no dought about that, but you both use simple fuckin rhymes.....
i mean i wanted to feel it but it was to simple.....
and the topic please rhyme about somethin else, i've been hearin this shit since 'mo' money'....
it was better than i expected.....
keep on, and show improvement.....
Nice... subject matter was nothing unusual but rhyme scheme and wordplay were there.. definately room for improvement.. dont take that as a slap.. but as a compliment.. potential shines...
shit, I've never seen better! you amazed me then glazed me like I was a jelly donut. shit a straight 10+ some. I was feeling the whole thing, way better then I could ever do but then again I'm just a newcomer with room for improvment, that was I-L-L!!! Sweet stuff I'll be awaiting the next colab.
give my rhyme called 'Bloody Sunday' a look if you guys get some spare time I could use some input on it, thanks, catch you both later, try and catcha record deal with that skills, my friend Nick did and you guys could top him anyday here, nice talent, teamed up I doubt anyone could take you two, well much praise given, so I think I've said enough.