New to all this.. hoping to get better
I'm MAD new to all this, and this is my first time posting anything.. this is all straight off the brain, so dont be too brutal to me! Let me know what ya'll think.. even if you aint feelin feeling me..
The rhymes you kick//that shit's irrelevent//to say ya shit is wack should be concidered a compliment//line ya'll up and murder ya'll just another stastic//Cant discover Propa's aura//she's just so mysterious//Check the questionaire//I'm runing outta paitence//my talents wasted// rhying with you// I got more skillz than ya crew//times two//get off my clit//this slits kissed strictly by ballers or better//Grab my beretta//then I wet cha like I never met ya//but I aint on that ole fake thugstress shit//Bitches clamin that they hard in the lines they spit//saying I'm nice with similes//but this is personification//like my mic's eating you alive in your elementry presentation//Praying to the rap gods//read the bible//check the scriptures//Rhymes repulsive//like a fat chick in porno pictures//Propa get in ya//inhaled through ya membranes//Then I saw like a chain//leavin massive bloodstains//Read the subscript//like the past//my rhymes revisit//explain to all all ya'll chickens about respect and how to get it//Learn the vice//I'm thrice as nice as anything you spit//Now study my words like hyroglyphs// maybe you could learn from it//
Rhythum and not bad for a first post..PEACE
pretty ill for a first post
I see what your saying, Madness... I didnt do it intentionally though, but I see where you comming from..point well taken, babe..
very nice for a new head...why'd you bite Common though..."They say I'm nice with metaphors, but these are similes" well not exactly ..but you know what I'm sayin...when you bite, your missing a chance for creation, the elevation of your OWN talent.Peace.
M A D N E S S
nice, finally someone on this board that pays attention to the rhthym
I enjoyed, everyone on this board has talent, and I'm new to this too,I've never really tooken it this seriously, I mean i've been on and off with it, but maybe we can all help each other to pick up on our bad notes and stuff, nah mean..
see ya around.....InV