Some more for yall
The master of the universe, just call me He man
A blunt smokin motherfucker, evil like a demon
fuck bitches so hard you can hear them fuckin screamin
pull out my cock and on their titties is where I am creamin
my dicks erectable ,my rhymes are technical,
your whack shits like a puck, easily deflectable.
my pages are collectable, never ever corectable
definetly fantastic, flexible like elastic
don't like aqua and barbie girls cuz the bitches look plastic,
like a milk carton,take a whiff bitch I'm fartin
chaos and war is what I'm startin
my path is what I'm chartin
200 down the highway dodge dartin
shut ya mouth kid, I dont wanna hear ya talkin,
getin drunk flyin high in the milleniem falcon,
chillin with Chewbacca, gettin head and drinkin vodka,
chewy gets some wierd alien chicks but they sure suck dicks,
check ya antics,your shits rediculous,
stupid and ludicrous, my style is fabulous.
So put both arms up like a clock at 12
I no I'm short but I aint no mothafuckin elve.
grab the bottle its over there on the shelve,
or maybe in the cabinet,find some nice pussy Im a stab it,fuckin white like roger rabbit,
like sugar ray Im a jab it.
rock the world like black sabbath
got so many possibilities, just gotta grab it,
but unmotivated from all my bad habits!
No man I don't think your a dumb fuck for giving advice.I know I'm nothing special,but ya, I definetly need some practice.
like the last flow you did.......its not really like a flo its not intacked or complete. its like you just went crazy and rhymed about anything. i give it a 4 out of 10. also you are very conceided, all you do is talk about that. Lots of rhymers do that and its beginning to sound wack. rhyme about stories incidents, anything. be unique and thoughtful. Talk about a bitch with a big ass or about a drug dealer that just got shot. You will be surprised how many people like to hear stories rather than just listen to the guy talk about himself. other than that the flo was consistant and it will go good with a beat. So keep practicing and you will get better. If you think that im just a dumb fuck talking a bunch of bullshit and you think that your flo is to tight to change then you will see what im talkin' about.