Aight yo, I'm new to this board so peep this rhyme and give me feedback...
Nurse, I’m afraid hip hop’s physical position is in a critical condition//
So let us embark on this lyrical mission......I’m going to have to operate.....//
If it was up to me, all the wack emcees would be deleted//
It seems a virus was secreted into hip hop that can't be defeated//
Never retreated, leaving the game depleted with the trend to use expletives//
To get their messsage across to the commercial stations across the nations, a
Of wackness, descending like blackness so its time to attack this with rap tactics and
Or else hip hops descention beyond redemption will be more than apparent, as
emcees become transparent//
Cuz they heartless, so I'ma impart this smartness that'll hopefully approach and coax
Into realising they're rhymes are bogus, instead they should be radient//
It's like wackness is increasing while tightness is decreasing beyond a known
So apologise cuz when I prophecise I'll pop your eyes and popularise the
With a heavy blast like a thunder sound, I find it fun to pound emcees who show no
For hip hop, I suggest they should stop and feel regret//
Oh no....it’s condition is deteriorating. Its bleeding ugly, we need to hurry...
Tight Ish Kid, Ill Flow
"If it was up to me, all the wack emcees would be deleted//
It seems a virus was secreted into hip hop that can't be defeated//"
Hope You'll Keep Posting
Cats Are Sleepy Today Though...
Poetic Disciplez '2000