Third Eye Wide.
Finding forrestor, core of the
Spy plane, that walk around wit a philhormanic orchestra
For dramatic cause, double 0 agent orange crush
Wetlands, born wit scales, and a Jordan touch
I don't enjoy enough pain, looking at me like a foriengner
Eyeing NY's skyline, a thesaurus clutch
King of the hill, on top of Lauryn, what!
One shot of cocktails malotov, I kick back
Spit till they got Third Watch on dispatch
Lift glass, cat burgle ya pad, fire up ya stove and simmer a can of whip ass
Ya like a ring on a swollen finger, can't come off
Sign ya life away, dropping verses like this don't sustain a young long
Maybe I'll jack my teeth up, stop rhyming in run ons
Get Nate dogg for a hook, a big headed DJ, an write dumb songs
I can't deny it, I'll be homeless ol' man
Wit an empty soup can, a Mason jar of spit, and a pissy notepad
She said I can't go back, got the Very fine and
I dream of putting seven of my nine in Jerry Ryan
Rampant rantings of a rabid chanting gargoyle
My mind's lost in dark oil
Rock one time got ya whole park loyal
Wrapping ya in foil, roast ya tender
Wit some potatoes and carrots and have ya folks for dinner
Chase vodka wit blood, I'd fuck you but I'm caught in the love
Watching my ass like the Warden does
A Saprano wearing a wire
Endicting fake BLACK mafia thugs, to careless ya liars
Tied in a chair choking on the air of the fire
Or wit Joe Pistone and Sammy the Bull sharing a tire
Return of the Flame, Verbal famed arrogant rhymer.
I feel what you getting at FiSK, but that really doesn't apply in this situation. Because he's not giving contructive advice, he's saying I can't claim something, when I can. Plus I'm gonna call cats on here about reviews and comments as much as their rhymes. It's my way of seeing if these peeps is credible, and true about this. You seem to be doing a lot of follow up on my posts, no harm, but remember I got you in my crosshairs, FISK.
nice drop verbal.. stay up
"it's people like me that helped me get better"--Verbal..dont forget it now cousin.
I don't know what this cat Self is on. First he's saying I can't say third eye, because you should show it, and not say it. The he says I can't claim it, for whatever reason. Then he claims It's all positive. Atleast be man or woman enough to diss me and fess up to it, when I pull your card. And not claim postive criticism. But I'm done wit it. I appreciate the love from other real peeps.
found the beginning more interesting. keep coming tho
nice triple optics...
welcome back and such
stay up and creative...
ahhh... ask and you shall receive aye?
"Return of the Flame, Verbal famed arrogant rhymer"- woRD, and a very welcomed return
see the steez has expanded, been molded, and now incorporates a more indepth introspection...feelin it, knaw lovin it
STELLAR ISH, don't be a stranger either
I dont know who i am dealing with?
why is that?
maybe your writtens reflect that answer.
no negativity bro.. all love.. just letting one in on some self perspective.
Come on Self, why you in my shit faking? How you claiming I can't claim thrid eye perspective? Cause I'm not some astrophysical, philosophical, physics bullshit.? Cause you can understand me? Don't come saying you on some positive shit obviously dissin' me son, you don't know who you dealing wit.
After which, your topic lead to less thought provocation, and more thought arrangement.
Your vocab is decent.
Claiming third eye perspective... something you cant do. if you got that third eye.. use it.. you dont need to say it. spy some ish worth reading. just some positive criticism bro.. i felt some parts of this..
the beginning was most creative tho..