This Is Mos Def My Best Audio Ever... Prepare To Be Astounded.
well boys and girls be prepared for this shit.... guarunteed you will be like "OH WHAT!?"
it's nice and short... but this definetly shows my skills.
for those without clicking abilitys:
I don't rep sack-town... I rep myself/
too fast now... can't detect the stealth/
come and step to bout... get a vest for health/
no stress never test... come and check it out/
the best and I'm blessed... came to wreck ya mouth/
like meth on strech... yellin it's tical/
shop for lead... for two shot's that bled/
one fake ass bitch said tupac was dead/
but legends never die... so neither did pac/
he's in the carribean... wit some reefer to spark/
so I'ma keep ya in chalk... like mobb deep when they talk/
fuck those two haters... off beat when they drop/
this is dedicated to fakes... who's spongin the fame/
medicated to break... both lungs and ya brain/
thought you done it the same?... my flows fuckin insane/
wanna drop like hot rocks... never stuck in the game/
and fuck the type... yellin underground for life/
who just cup mic... using other clowns for hype/
like a switch I flip on... ready to spit songs/
wanna rap but can't free? damn that shits wrong/
yo, peep don't sleep... if you listen at least tell me what you think.
Thanks Kal, thats what I was thinking...
Shatter Star did you read this rhyme?
What line here has a 1 syllable ending?
Not bad...when we battled QS and them you said QS was so basic and had 1 syllables...your kinda' doing it now, not that it matters that much.
This was aiight...you need energy like most of em' said...I can tell you listened to Meth before you spit it...I like it.
Look at it on the bright side...all these replies!
It was all about feedback in the 1st place.
S-Star The Prophet
aight .. i kinda liked this in ways
This was nice, I didn't hear the RA, but I read the verse. You got a nice grasp on wordplay and delivery, had some ill lines, but overall it just gets boring after awhile, still nice though.
Oh Please man ...Wasn't Shit personal about my Comment...And I'd Blow you out da Water in "Audio" so chill out...You post shit for Critique & dats what you got...Don't Cry about da Shit & Work on it
"where in my reply did i piss on you?! fuck i hate when things get blown out abortions"- aahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
yea you need energy......like I said
MAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSHHHHHHHHH OOOOOOOOUUUUUUTTTTTTTTT POSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DIS IZ "FIRE-SPITTA" FROM IRON-FIST ENT.
THE BEAT WAS OK...NOT HARD BUT OK. U HAVE A MADD TIGHT VOICE FOR DA' INDUSTRY SO KEEP IT UP YA' HEARD. MAYBE WE CAN HOOK UP AND DO SOME JOINTS TOGETHER. ARE U SOLO OR WITH A GROUP??? AND ONE MO THING YO' A TRUE ARTIST CAN EXCEPT TRUE CRITISIZEM. AIIGHT.
yo this was actually pretty good cause I was expecting a wack ass audio... shits too typical around here
if thats ur beat, pretty tight shit
if not, who is it
on another note, you hyped this shit up a little too much cause it wasnt really like "Oh what!?", it was more like "hmmm pretty good"
I think u got mad potential but you fucked up when you fed off your ego instead of your confidence... theres a big difference
couple tips that helped me in the past...
you should have compressed your voice to make it sound a little better
also.. it kinda sounded like you were reading some of it, I noticed this first when u said "too fast now"
still like I said before, I've heard lotsa audios on this board, and most of them were pretty disappointing, but this one held up, just not to the hype
if you wanna check some ILLLLLL audios that have been posted do a search on VG Skillz.. thats one name that sticks out in my mind
get at me for an audio collab if you feel like throwin down
mik skillz ...
illness, mans - you "ride" that beat well.
monotonous ? what affekz said - though.
but a shizload of props ...
well ...atleast a bucket.
I totally second AFFEX' statement.
You lack energy. That's basically what makes your delivery weak. It sounds almost like your reading your lines. So, here's a suggestion: get hyped up before recording. Play some Premo beats or whatever's ya steez, but make sure you got that energy. Throw in emotion. There's a difference between saying that you're the best and actually believing it. So, ya gotta sound more convincing. Also, play with the flow a bit. It doesn't have to be perfect, just make sure you feel comfortable spitting your lyrics. Aiight, ya got a nice voice, so just work on delivery and flow and you'll be much better.
Btw...don't feel offended by Psyence's reply and Really~Doe's reply, cuz they just gave their opinions, whether or not you like them. Also, don't ask for shit like "Where's your audio ?". You don't need to record audio to know good music. And think about this, it ain't so mindblowing that they pointed out the bragging thing, cuz honestly, statements like: "well boys and girls be prepared for this shit.... guarunteed you will be like "OH WHAT!?" and "it's nice and short... but this definetly shows my skills" are kinda misleading.
Aiight. I hope my opinion was of some help, and if not, then I wasted my time typing this.
where in my reply did i piss on you?! fuck i hate when things get blown out abortions. damn. i just said something and you think i´m pissing on you!? look for one post where i piss on someone or just diss. whatever. search on my name and you´ll find some.
whatever... call yourself the best and see what the world thinks...fuck...now i´m pissed but this isn´t war so....
goddamn.... I value yours affex... you broke it down to me.
the rest just got pissy cause I bragged a bit.
to those other two:
can you spit shit like that?
show me your audios
yeah ..Basically it was Borin....Not Wack...But sure as hell wasn't "Oh shit"....Some of da Lyrics made Nann Sense ...Flow was ZzZzzZZzZ...My Freshman Steez...But at least you Blessin Mics man..keep doin it..Peace
sp? what the hell is sp?! have seen it a lot of times but this dude still can´t figure....
hmm....keep doing it...but don´t brag too much...cause it wasn´t that ill....but i still felt it....peaces.......rock on.....
I both was, and wasn't feelin the beat...I dont know, dont ask...the baseline was nice and the guitar sample, but...hmm....anyway...
flow was nice, no doubt, very simple though, with short lines, therefore easy to spit...but your delivery could've been better, very monotonous (sp?).....needs energy