Hip Hop Presents..."ghostbiters" Part 1
Kill off the verbal breed of hip hop with too much rhymes of virtue//
the greatest lyricist better duck cuz my punchlines will hurt you//
spend actual time on a rhyme so ya "ghostbiters" can learn-//
about my skills, getting profits that my scripts really earned//
do my bars really burn? you bet I blaze with ever word I say//
so much "dickriding" on this website, it's hard to deny that ya'll gay//
I ain't here to play, microphone netcees wanna battle, get ready//
cuz a machetti couldn't match up to my tactics,//
this poetic damage is far from pety//
don't ever bite the hand with the mic, I'm the type that lays down laws//
tearing up ya'll tracks like claws, so keep your words trapped in your jaws//
cuz if you pop shit, I'll spit the illest scripts ever before//
"ejactulating" in a porno to show ya my "flow" is hardcore//
so how many dictionaries does it take a netcee to become ill?//
dropping shitty-loads of post, most of ya'll, I don't feel//
now it's funny, cuz when ya'll saying that some of our verses are poor//
you on ya block in a cypher, spitting our rhymes like it's yours...
This ain't over...
killa...r u nuts...
this is the easiest thing 2 spit over any beat...
im feelin it tho'...
sometimes complexity is way overrated
UP the vocab
actually, the flow was really poor, couldn't even read it over a beat. alright concept, been done, over, and over, and over, but it's still good to see. only, this kind of post really only has meaning if you can hear it, know what i mean? cause if you just say this shit, then it could be hypocriticle, understand?
the vocab needs to be expanded more on the real tho'....besides that it's fresh
I feel tha same way bout these forums.
This wasn't a great post though, it was mediocre. keep postin'