Yo I Ain't Much Of A Text Battler But Kane, Here's Your Battle
when you rock the name Kane your namesake creates the fakeness with No Limit~
similar to yourself...a Soldier unAble to make waves even in a Tank spinnin circles in puddles for Sixty Minutes~
doesn't take Investigative Reporting to figure why heads are snoring~
yo drop boring...style repeats like Back to the Future 3~
you pretend to be an mc, singin along to jay-z in you're pinto wishin it was a Dolorian~
i Build Works of Art like Architecture Victoian~
While you Construct garbage, African Shacks infested with rats...a cause for the Born Agains~
like "it just takes seven cents a day" to make kane more paid...than what he'll ever make from rappin~
playin old folks homes on entertainment saturdays~
join the Saints of Latter Day cause cause you get slayed off the top of the dome~
or in a written melee Today~
you pray for the inevitable Delayed~
sorry, you get ate Post Haste like a vegetable~
played insane hard like a Retard running back with No Use of His Legs~
by the way, are yours Shaved?~
well i hope your Pussy is cause Razorblades can't maneuver all the impending Band-Aids~
oh, when you eat out you're moms how does my dick taste?~
you like incest?~
well Deliverance to the deep woods of the Appalachians is your consolation vacation~
where you could abandon rap and Duel with Banjos and then be a sensation~
you front so hard, you could fake you're way into being the only white kid in the PNB Nation.
(keepin it short for a easy read so i would expect a verse reply to be similar in length)
ayo son, dis shit got the most replies so far (well until i come out wit mine, which will be in a couple a weeks, so get ready)
lacking entertainment even, and your shots at Statik are the meaning to ignorance.
kal-el put things best, as usual, that image was damn humorous, where did you find it?
you a fuckin herb
word to flatliner - some nice ideas, badly executed.
had a couple of nice lines ...
this seems totally unspittable, though.
the epitome of netceeism.
if you're on a net-board droppin rhymes,
you should still
practice ...to make it ...spittable.
a real-life crowd'd never go for this ...
so why should a "net" crowd ?
nah ...you gotta make it more personal,
and drop more "wow !" typa punches.
use some nice rhymeschemes.
and make sure you write your rhymes ...ON-BEAT.
only a handful can pull off ...an off-beat delivery, in my opinion.
My bad that I haven't replied to your verse yet, but I was out of town for a while, so that's why...
Anyways, I won't read your verse, and just post mine ASAP...
You asked for it.
whose seen american pie 2....???
Aw Good Gawd dis was Bad...Kane's a Sneaky ass cat sooo...he won't need Half as many Bars to beat dat shit...I'm sayin..It's Evident..your not much of a Battler..period....Maybe you'll come out'cha Shell later on...text means very lil anyway...Where's dem Vocals you where Typin about?
If figured it would be nice...
But I've found out that most of the flaming folders, are just cats defending their weak shit...
I'm glad I checked it out or I wouldn't have gotten to check the comedy!
Tha Infamous DMC"
Think about it..........
i liked a few of the lines...
didnt think this was very hard, i just didnt get an anger vibe off it like you usually do
oh yeah...b4 i forget, you're really not using that much word play, and when you do they are simple.
ive seen much harder things to decypher than this...
but i cant rap at all, so, in that regard
good for you [insert applause here]
iwannaseeStatik and wordwisebattleitout.
this was strange. liked some lines however.
i hate when people flood their own posts but when statik was sayin all this shit, non-constructive, i felt obligated to defend. in the title i stated that i don't claim to be the best text battler which is why i try to battle on this board to improve wordplay and punches for my writtens to be recorded anyway theses are my last words on this post
Word to Kal El... He had the mos intelligent comments on this..
Fuggit.. Kal El Wins..!
Ignorance to the weak is BlisS....
This reminds me of some JWORDS shit.....but like 3 levels wacker.
But seriously.......your Odd Icon complex is really not needed. Let people voice their opinions.
Your ignorant to the fact that, this sucks ass. No cleverness, ruthless lines, nothing.
The only this worthwhile was maybe.....the architecture/ seven cents a day african lines.....
But cats like you.....keep doing your thing, ride your own dicks. And stay on 'the next level'.
I thought it sucked, but I'd still pay money to see him try to spit it on the mic.
word to flatliner..