Politiks-on Some Daydreamin Sh*t
I split the sky with a blunt-scented razor blade//
Fill it up with enemies and smoke away pain//
They say my life is priveleged and it’s all about winning//
But I overdosed on Prozac and my boyfriend hates women//
‘Scuse me, Did I say Prozac? Cuz I meant pennicilin?//
I’m a schizophrenic and my bed is on the ceiling//
Or maybe it coule this wall, shit all of them are padded//
Don’t worry when my high comes down life won’t seem so tragic//
My verses are weaker than a 92 year old paraplegic//
And when I serve they still confusin you parasitical leeches//
Rhymin’ bout reefer with your veins bulgin’ and throbbin’//
I just pretend I’m feeling you when I’m smilin’ and noddin’//
Pardon my giggles, I’m tipsy, the room’s spinnin’ and I’m zonin’//
I just guzzled a fifth of fermented souls of my opponents//
And your hypochondriac ass think you got every kind of illness//
Ain’t been sick a day in your life and sayin’ you don’t feel this//
Enough about you, I’m dizzy and I’m hallucinating//
I feel the candy-coating melt and naked truth invading//
Hey! There goes Dick Cheney sodomizing a Blue Donkey//
And check out that Red Elephant ridden by that Texan honkey//
Damn, I been asleep this long and the country’s still Republican?//
I miss Bill Clinton lyin’ bout not gettin his dick sucked again//
Aight, back to this battle, that’s enough daydreamin’//
You still cussin bout weed, spittin, chokin, and screamin’//
With them 30 garbage bars you just built your prison cell//
So let me drop a verse and show you how one’s written well//
Please give me feedback and peep my other two posts.
I got your feedback on my verse so i had to check your shit. I like it. Im critical about people on this board but i was diggin your shit. Keepin me interested. NIce style and originality. Ill keep an eye on you - keep checkin me out and give me your toughts.
some strange shit right here ...
"the room's circles, I see giant irish arses"-typa strange shit ...
pfff - yo ...had some nice lines ...
fo sho -
stay, pz -
Yo, this shit was good.
Thanx for critizin' my shit, I need to learn a whole lot more.
Peep my future postings.
much love DD
that was hott.. you kinda stretched some of the rhymes.. i guess i gotta hear it right? ... you have a hott flow.. get at me maybe we can do a collabo...
Na.Na. That was surgical. Word. "blunt scented razor" loved that shit. Ps
yea id thought sum ppl wud av loved that line. Newayz here's ur feedback. U on some levels man, some nice shit. I wernt really feeling this 1 as much as ABC's ( i just read it).
feeling this man...
definately one of the eye opening cats that i've seen on the board in eons... entertainment is good the post is definatley a thought provoker and has some funny content man.. stay up..
sorry bout the typos
"Or maybe it could be this wall, shit all of them are padded//"
Shit I was feelin. Keep Doin U.
Ps. Bill Clinton My Son. Dont hate LOL.
"I just guzzled a fifth of fermented souls of my opponents//"
You on some DOmented shit...It's Dope..You didn't reach too much