1 Way Out
"this is dedicated to all the abused
woman and children out there"
You come crying to my door night after night-
Telling me how you had got in a fight-
The bruises on your face told the tale-
About the man who had gaven you hell-
The constant nights of the hollering and screaming-
"Theres hope in the relationship" you must had to been dreaming-
One of these dayz he’ll go to far-
Night after night he's benjing in the bar-
Coming home drunk outta his mind-
Every night he'll be stepping outta line-
When he raises he hand, oh so high-
Cant you tell with the blank stare in his eye-
He aint in the right state of thought-
you need to open your eyes, and remember what youve been taught-
remind him that he cant cross your baseline-
tell him to follow the the bread crumbs, and step back in line-
cuz the destruction of your face is all i see-
makes you wanna put him in the 6x3-
but use the knowledge and pack your things-
leave his presence, and see what peace that brings-
ya know the number simply dial 911-
put him in the steel cage for the tourture he has done-
dont be another statistic in the book-
do what ya gotta do, and take back what he has took-
the wounds are not permaentant the can mend-
and now im done, finish this story on a happy end-
/\ damn whut kind of weed is that....Bizarre......
have you ever noticed that when you smoke marijuana your eyes become red triangles and the black pupil inside stretches out to resemble that of a feline
TRU THAT TRU THAT
i did this just 2 make a point,this wasnt really suppose 2 be pure underground but i can see where catz goin wit this, it was made 2 be simple, peep my up coming posts and ya see tha REAL UNDERGROUND aaight hola
you need to go to grammar school and fix up your english...
u put a good concept into a dissapointing rhyme.....
"keep it underground???"
you really need to think about picking a different style. this one you rap with is so basic- it sounds like a little kids poem or something. i was feeling the concept but i couldnt get into it because the style and structure was kinda wack. L8R,
The ha-y-n Emcee
thank you i tried 2 change my tempo and give a shout out 2 how it is
That was nice, I like your message...on some Love is Blind type shit.
Peep my shit, give me your thoughts.