"YOU CAN;T HANDLE THE TRUTH" you can't handle trueson,peep thesctratch
it's too cluttered. you need more consisten drums and not play that sample so much. the scratching is off cue.
i gotta agree with Lil ...he said some of my beats were wack too when i posted them, but i respect that cause it motivates me to work harder. peace
thanks for the more useful replies..and as for mr daddy.. you still came off vvith negativity... i dont understand hovv or vvhy anyone vvould dispise someone over the net..but any vvay as i said b4 your replies mean nothing to me they are "opinions" and that's all ...one ,love... i vvish you peace even if you vvish me the opposite,the double vees are because my key is stuck and i'm lovv budget like that aight...don't trip on me kid, my moms sick and im on vvelfare and i live vvith my uncle so dont think your little reply is going to upset my vveek...just to set you straight...peace
You won't hear any of my beats for a while Trueson. But as a fan of music, i'd like to say this beats not entertaining at all. The melody is not tight, and so harsh to my ears that it's hard for me to listen for a long time. It might be the real audio fuckin it up, though. The drums are so typical and the rhythm they're played is boring also. The scratching is too loose and all over the place. Very repetitive. The vocals you scratch are cluttering up everything, basically overpowering the track, which could be a good thing for this garbage beat.
I know my replies mean nothing to you, but I hope this response suits you better. I didn't want to go into detail because I figured that if I called your shit garbage, you'd question your own shit and find the flaws for yourself. I don't think you need me to point this out to you, it's plain as day what's wrong with your track.
Stop using this: vv for the letter w. That shit is hella corny.
Peace and Love.
the beat is ok...needs more to it tho....
the cuts suck....you need to fade out more when you back cue...otherwise there is too much commotion going on..namsayin...
no disrespect but try a little harder workin on your back cuing and scratches and add a little harder beat to the track its pretty ok but it could be better. peace
damn vvas it that bad..i've seen your other replies your comment to me means nothing...please come vvith better more constructive critism ...i havent heard any of your ish... pieces
The scratchin...EVEN WORSE
Please practice before you post. Peace.