Leave Me Alone - Or - Heave Me A Bone.
I need to be outside
This dummy dwelling keeps me stuffy
For these pristine egos keeping a clean nose
To the public eye.
Easy answers belittle riddle composure
If youre looking for a little closure
Try looking a little closer.
Im going no where
With this one.
I hope i end up some place better
Home is where the Heart is
But its hard when both are broken.
Cupid cant patch
A house of tattered connects with an arrow
The same way my chest clock love cabinet
shatters under daddy's hammer.
Its all bullshit in the tool shed
With a full head of self esteem
Cleaning the here and now pistons
That stear around my gimmicks.
If i could communicate as well
as id like to, youd prolly like me
But i cant. so oh well. i live.
Not one to brag
But i cant punch my way out of a wet paper bag
So i copped a hole-punch and made a mask
I wrote poems on the inside.
Drying a liquid logged soggy proclaimation fog
Toggle the hologram slant
and schuffled off the yawns of groggy phantoms.
An Ungodly anthem
Lancing disembodied bandwiths
Of rotting standards
What do you stand for?
I keep a clean sweep of ideas
Ideas can be changed
Beliefs remind me of stains
and im alabaster,
your an opaque voiceprint if you will
Yeah. and the same to you.
And while im at it,
make that one more for your painfull look.
LEAVE ME ALONE
HEAVE ME A BONE
. care concealed in my ideals
but some say im apathetic.
im as apathetic as i want to be
You couldnt dish me a reason to beLIEve in
The path in front of me.
he said..(philosophical, madd smart shit is for fags) i luagh at this ass whole....nah just messin
i know people should critique and shit
but i dont really see much to improve on with this
except i didnt get the rhyme in the first stanza...maybe its just me...maybe it wasnt supposed to...its your work so it doesnt really matter if any of us get it or not anyway
but yeah...cool ass poetry as usual...nice to see a lil more length in this one
this was nice...../\???????
philosophical, madd smart shit is for fags!
come on now.. we gotta drop some raunchy sex raps for once. get with the program james..
10 paces, eh?...
i've got yr bone, doobie...
hit me up with an email...
we should collaborate on some ill.type, philisophical, madd smart raps... nahmean, nahmean?...
james dean (email@example.com)