Just Let Me Know What You Think . .
This only my second post on the MC board, Im not a full-time MC or even call myself an MC or anything but i like to write. . .
check this and just let me knwo what you thought . . .
"Quit acting childish like in a game of "peek-a-boo"
cuz i see you
matter of truth i swim in the shallow waters of your gene pool
to comprehende me it's like the translation of Hebrew
Im as complicated as the minds of extremely schitophrenic people.
I grow stronger by the minute, take a breath and stride
Im afraid of losing my girl becuz i fear the death inside
My thoughts will collapse and relapse so i guess that's twice
I even share my emotions kid . . Im just that nice
At any given moment you can feel the power of my truth
I was told im the chosen so at every hour, i rule
guided by the sonar with light as my shower
I might be heartless but i still appreciate the life of a flower"
Short but simple
iit was good but at the end u rhymed little words somtimes, but in between the rhyms was phat